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Just now catching up on several weeks worth of posts on the boards, so I'm leaving feedback on all four parts at once.

Interesting premise. (Of course, I knew it would be just because it was Paul who was posting.) I did get a little sad though seeing how Alan broke up with his wife, especially as they were just starting on their second chance.

Very interesting seeing the show entirely through a bit character's POV. I can understand why he feels that Superman doesn't do a good job with "clean-up", even as I feel like arguing with him, "Hey, he does so much as it is!"

Almost choked when I realized he was trying to recruit Cat. Didn't see that one coming at all.

Well done. (Except for that really BAD joke that I won't admit liking, "The Fortress of Sewertude.")

Elisabeth

Well, I guess everyone else was stunned into silence, but thanks for the comments, Elisabeth.

Glad you're enjoying the story - with, perhaps, one little exception... That line was kind of a guilty pleasure for me (too ).

Glad you liked the twist with Cat, too.

And... sorry I'm not being more articulate, but I've had a long weekend and I'm pretty tired right now. So I'm just going to go ahead and post Part 5. But thanks again for commenting.

Paul

Sorry, Paul, for not commenting. I do like this story. I like the different viewpoint.