Wow, thanks everyone! I'm really glad you all enjoyed this little fic.
As for making it longer... who knows? Maybe someday, but probably not for quite some time.
DJ - funny that you mention AFTS, because I was just itching to use it in that story. But, alas, it didn't fit in. Lois had that article about Superman and knew there was a man who could fly. And the piece just didn't have the same wistfulness without that lack of knowledge.
Thank you again, everyone, for the lovely feedback!
Sara