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This is a crossover with Buffy the vampire slayer.
If there's anything you think I can do to improve the story, let me know.
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Merriwether
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Where on earth did you get this idea? I love it.
I think, therefore, I get bananas.
When in doubt, think about time travel conundrums. You'll confuse yourself so you can forget what you were in doubt about.
What's the difference between ignorance, apathy, and ambivalence?
I don't know and I don't care one way or the other.
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Top Banana
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Lovin' it. I never followed Buffy, but I've heard of Anya.
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Top Banana
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I had no idea who Anya was but I loved the story  
If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.
Waking a Miracle by Aria
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Kerth
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 Delightful! Now how about a sequel in which Lana meets Lois and Clark and feels guilty about the fate she wished on him?
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Nobel Peace Prize Winner
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I have no idea who Anya is, but... Shayne, I've never really seen the similarities between Lois and Lana before, but now you're making me realize that Lana is just less Lois than Lois!  What a lovely story! Ann
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Kerth
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For those who don't know, Anya was a vengeance demon who specialized in vengeance against men who had wronged a woman -- or that the woman perceived had wronged her -- and the crime didn't have to be very much of one, either.
I happened to see the Buffy episode that introduced Anya. In its own way, it was funny as well -- mixed with drama, of course.
This was very good, Shayne. Actually, I'd have described Lois as more intense but also much more bearable than Lana. In the end, I'd say the vengeance spell backfired.
Nan
Earth is the insane asylum for the universe.
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Columnist
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I am a buffy fan as well as a Lois and Clark fan. I saw crossovers between the two in the past, but I didn't care much of them. But your little story, I really loved it! The sacarstic thoughts of Anya about Lana, and her boredom, are so in character! It made me laugh. And at the end, when Lana made her wish, was even more funny. So cute! She just made her ex boyfriend the happiest man on Earth. 
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and in walks Lois Lane! Don't do this to me at  6:00 in the morning--everyone else is asleep and I almost hurt myself keeping quiet. Vonceil
Johnny was a chemist,
Now Johnny is no more,
For what he thought was H two O
Was really H two S O four.
--Lab safety limrick--
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Awesome! I love Anya (so funny - bunnies! - but god, did she break my heart in "The Body") and I loved how you did this. As Tempus would say, "God, I love irony."
Fanfic | MVs Clark: "Lois? She's bossy. She's stuck up, she's rude... I can't stand her."Lana: "The best ones always start that way.""And you already know. Yeah, you already know how this will end." - DeVotchKa
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LOL!! That is just too darned funny. And very clever. Thanks for giving me a good smile and laugh. Hutch 
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Merriwether
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Very good, Shayne - Lana got her wish, but she didn't cover enough bases!
lisa in the sky with diamonds
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That was very good. I still kinda figured Anya was some kind of magical vengeance...thing, having never seen Buffy. I never really recognized how bossy and pushy both Lois and Lana are until having to compare them in a story. <g> The only (big) difference for me is Lana held Clark back while Lois pushed him to be all that he could be, to echo the army. <g>
JD
"Meg...who let you back in the house?" -Family Guy
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Freelance Reporter
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hahahaha I loved it Shayne! How very clever. Good one shot.
"Oh--as usual--dear." -Giles
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