I loved it too, Barbara. I think I particularly loved to see how the three of them worked together, Lois, Clark and Becca. Consider this, for example:
All of a sudden, she heard a metallic sound and a heavy thud. Startled, she looked over to the entrance of the shelter, finding it open. The man who had knelt there was lying on his back, but already trying to get back on his feet. Lois didn't waste another thought on her safety and rushed towards him, sending him back to the ground with a violent kick as soon as he had recovered. He remained lying there, unmoving.
I assume that the guy was hit on the head when Clark forced open that door from inside? Because of that, the man was weakened sufficiently for Lois to take care of him with her tae-kwon-do.
Half running on his own, half being dragged and carried by Becca and Lois who had both taken his hands, Clark was making his way through the high snow.
This is a lovely image, too. Lois and Becca are working together to help Clark.
I really think this is the beginning of a beautiful relationship between Becca, Lois and Clark!
Great part, Barbara!
Ann