This Part was Excellent!!
Your imagery was just wonderful at the beginning.
Out the window, Lois could see the last rays of the sun fading from a sky that was turning dark. It was twilight, the time once known as the gloaming.
I have always loved that term.
For some reason, Lois’s hands itched for a weapon.
The shelving was all metallic. Lois scuttled backwards, and returned to their seats. These had thick wooden slats on the back.
Lois leaned forward on one of the chairs and said quietly, “Jimmy, gather everything together.”
He nodded, for the first time noticing the expressions on both their faces.
Lois heard a cracking sound, and the wooden piece she was leaning against cracked. She looked up at Jimmy, who was staring at her, and she shrugged.
People didn’t take care of things at public libraries anyway.
She pulled at the wood, which splintered, and the whole thing came off in her hand.
Isn't insticnt wonderful? She doesn't even know--for sure--what will stop them other than fire, but she goes right for the wood without thinking about it.
“I’ve heard that the blood of your kind is like a drug for mine. It’s supposed to be better than sex, better than chocolate, a real rush.”
Lois should relate to the Choloate comment very well.
Angelica returned to her field of vision, blood running down her chin. “Young and sweet. He’ll be popular at dinner. Much better than the horrible old winos I’ve had to eat.”
YOu know, for a moment there I thought I was going to have to send my little friend after you
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for making Jimmie into a Vapire. Lois has enough guilt as it is without having to vanquish Jimmie on top of everything else.--YES send the boy home to keep him safe.
She caressed his face, which was expressionless. Leaning against him, she said, “We wasted so much time. Now we’ll be together forever.”
ICK--Clark as a supervampire-
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- would you need a kryptonite coated stake to stop him. . . <shiver>
Lois could hear an agonized howl from Angela, who was holding her bloody mouth. A moment later Angela was flying, and stacks of shelving were falling.
She tried to bite Clark!! I hope she broke all of her teeth!!!
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“I don’t think I’m human anymore,” Lois said at last.
“I don’t think I ever was,” Clark said quietly.
I know it's already been quoated--but this was just the most wonderful revelation (double revelation) I've seen in a long time.
Wonderful Job!!!
I'm looking forward to the next part!!! Make it soon please.
Vonceil
