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wow!! A new story from Laura.. yay! and it's a younger Lois and Clark ... looking forward to more postings..

Hmm 3 months seems to have some significance for both our heroes.. the literary competition is in 3 months and Lois has 3 months to prove herself..

Umm had one question...is it a little too much to hope Clark teaches at Metropolis High? (j/k)

Very interesting start, Laura!!

I love the premise! Teacher Clark and, hopefully, undercover student Lois Lane!! Add a bit of smarmy, suave Claude, and I think this is going to be a 'super' ride!!

I'd be willing to beta for you if you wish. Send me a PM if you're interested!

Missy

Oooo! Teacher Clark sounds hot! Sad to say, but if I had an english teacher, or any teacher for that matter, that looked half as good as he did, I would have paid better attention in school! Or at least, I would have looked forward to that class

Very interesting premise! Vaguely reminds me of 'Never Been Kissed.'

And HA! I started cracking up when I read Claude's last name was Malfois. I figured the name suited him And his description kind of reminded me of Remy Lebeau from the X-Men, so sadly I was swooning right along with Lois.

Sounds roughly like one of my favorite movies, "Never Been Kissed". I can't wait to read more. I'm not sure I envy Clark if Lois Lane ends up in his classroom. Would she challenge everything he said?

Awesome story, Laura! For some reason I always like elseworlds stories where Clark is a teacher (or Clark and Lois are both teachers).

I particularly liked that Clark is such a caring teacher. It's like him in (I was about to say real life...but that wouldn't be right) canon, I know, but somehow his character always amazes me.

So yes...is Lois to become an undercover student? Or perhaps a teacher? Hmm... Interesting...

I will definitely be keeping up with this story! Looking forward to Part 2 - how far away would you say it was?

~Anna.

Hmmmm, I'm reminded of an old ABBA hit, "When I Kissed the Teacher...." I wouldn't mind seeing Lois kiss Clark in this story!

And, since I'm a teacher myself, I was really giggling at this:

Not even Clark can keep all his students spellbound when he is teaching American literature!

I did a double take at this:

Lexy Hartness? Why does this sound so much like Lex, the Heartless?

Anyway, those two girl-horrors have to be stopped!!!!

But what is this?

Claude? No!!!! Nonononononooooo!!!!! Don't let this Claude have sex with Lois and don't let him steal her story!!!! I can't stand it!

(But I have to say, you have given Claude a most marvellously appropriate last name....)

I'm very much looking forward to more, Laura! Only please don't let the awful things happen between Lois and Claude!! Please? Please? Pretty please? With sugar on top?

Ann

Noooo, keep scoffing! lol.

Great start, I'm looking forward to catching up with this in a couple of weeks when I am back in town.

JD

Oh, OK, I was going to wait longer before rushing to reply to feedback, but I can't wait. I'm too excited. Especially because I was so scared about posting this! I don't have it finished yet, so I'm relying on you guys to really kick my butt til it's done. But I do have a lot written! Don't get too upset!

AnKS- Hmm... 3 months. I suppose that was me using artistic license to make everything coincide neatly. *Sigh* I don't suppose it would do to have poor Clark teaching at Kansas Wheatfield High or something. He just might have to teach in Metropolis. Thanks for starting up the thread!

Missy-- Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed the premise! Good thing, since I already took you up on your extremely generous offer. Mmm... teacher Clark. Yes, I hope everyone likes it! Thanks so much for all your help.

Catherine-- Thank YOU! And we've already exchanged anecdotes about our sexy 8th grade teachers. Unfortunately my cute 8th grade algebra teacher wasn't interested in his 13-year-old student! (Why, I can't even imagine... ) And you definitely hit the nail on the head. I loooove Never Been Kissed and I suppose this starts out very much like it. But Josie Gellar and Lois Lane are a bit different. And it veers off from NBK land pretty quickly too.

rkn-- See above, but I love NBK too. But don't worry guys! This isn't a rewrite of Never Been Kissed. It should prove to be VERY different. Thanks for commenting!

Princessanna-- Mmm... I like Clark as a teacher too. Some drool worthy fantasies, there.

Hmmm... I have about 11,000 words written so far of the entire thing. But unfortuantely that doesn't last too long here! I'm going to be writing furiously though. I have to leave next Thursday to go to Peru (!) for about a week and a half. So some time before then, I'll post the second chapter. (it's a little more interesting, too. )

TOC--

Are you suggesting Lois compromise her position for some physical gratification?! *giggles and walks off whistling*

Maybe. If you've read anything I've ever written, you know they'll probably end up kissing sometime. I'm a bit of a creature of habit.

Mmm... I think I'd be too busy drooling onto my desk.

Oh my gosh! I so didn't plan that at all. And it just so happens that she's the meaner one. Good catch!

Don't worry! Things might get rough, but I'm a firm believer in happy endings. And you have to thank Olympe for such a great name. That cracked me up.

I have to leave for work now, so I wanted to get this reply out. You guys ROCK! I feel so inspired to write a little more now. Maybe I can squeeze in a few more words before I have to leave.

Thanks guys!!!

Laura


Ooops, sorry JD! You snuck in as I was posting.

The evil Claude! I'm telling Lois to scoff too! Unfortunately she doesn't pay me any attention... :rolleyes: Thanks for reading! I hope I'll have a lot of story for you to catch up on whenever you get back from... wherever.

Wow! What a great start!

I'd love to see Lois go undercover and end up being one of Clark's students. Now wouldn't that be interesting...

Guess I'll have to wait and see where you're going with this. I look forward to reading more!

My daughter, who reads other fanfics but not L&C, made a comment starting, "Have you ever read a really good fanfic . . . " and I answered "Yes, I'm reading one now." It's a great start! I especially loved the description of Clark's class--after teaching a few informal classes myself, I sympathize with his frustration, and I can't wait to see where that part of the story goes. And I liked your version of Lois, but like the others I hope we don't see too much of Claude--he might help move the story along (or keep Lois from realizing her attraction to Clark right away), but I'd hate to see him as a major character, and I hate to see Lois fall for someone so sleazy. So count me as one of those waiting anxiously for the next installment--please don't make us wait too long!

This is going to be a great story! You've already completely drawn me in. More! More!

Hi! More FDK!

Hi Symbolicangel! I'm glad you liked the first part and that you're all set for the rest. Missy and Catherine kindly volunteered to help me out and so hopefully I'll get the next chapter out soon.

Cookiesmom-- Glad you enjoyed it!

this: Made me blush like crazy! About Claude... hmm... We'll have to see where Lois goes with this crush she has on him. I don't like the guy either.

Hi groobie! Yay for more! I'm glad you're drawn in! My evil plan is succeeding.

Thank you EVERYONE for the wonderful reviews. I'll get chapter 2 up in a couple of days, probably. I've quite a bit of chapters 2...3...4... maybe even 5 written, but it needs to be edited and also, I'd like to keep writing so I have those chapters as backup. Thanks again everyone!

Great start! I'll be looking for part 2.

Elisabeth

Laura, I know I'm late... but I'm here! I loved part one and I just wanted to smack Claude. But I love your portrayal of him - Claude would have had to be really good looking and debonair to have swept Lois Lane off her feet...

Ooooh, and Clark as a teacher? OMG - how drool-worthy is that? I loved that he didn't want to leave a big mess for the janitors to clean up. Awww... that's our sweet little Clark.


Nice start!

-- DJ

Wow! FDK! That was a fun surprise to my morning. Thanks DJ! I'm glad you liked it so far. Clark Kent as a teacher... mmm... I agree. Extremely droolworthy. I've got about 6 more chapters up, so I hope if you decide to check them out that you like them too. Thank you!

Laura

I've been a little nervous to read this because it involves Claude. The minute I see his name it conjures up many horrible feelings. I just don't want Lois to get hurt, but I guess she will(?). I'm going to be daring and read on!

I'm so proud of Lois going out and finding a story to dive into. I'm very happy for her, but of course, afraid she'll get hurt. Perhaps Mr. Kent teaches at that school...

My goodness, how did I miss this? (Morgana dives into story.)

Loved every aspect of this story. Is Lexy Harkness related to Luthor?

Claude? Eek!


Aww! This description of Perry is exactly the way I imagine him.