Yee-yikes! Angelica is freakin' nuts! I expected her to use Clark in a power grab, but I never anticipated that she'd use him to establish her own dictatorship. Now that she's more powerful than the other vampires, doesn't that mean that she's more powerful than any single Slayer? Yee-yikes twice!
When Clark broke that big demon's neck, I thought he'd crossed the line, but it didn't kill him! You'd be surprised what a demon can live through. I know I am.
Lois is going to have to face her on-on-one and risk losing a fight so that Clark's bond will be dissolved and he can rescue her as she's rescuing him. And then he can help with the other demons and vampires. Of course, someone's going to have to take out Amy the witch first.
Any way you slice it, this isn't going to be easy. And somebody on the side of the - I was going to say 'good guys' but I'll go with 'less bad guys' - is going to die. Maybe several somebodies.
Yow, Shayne! This is getting better and better with each chapter! Keep it coming!
I wonder, did you pick Amy's and Angelica's names because they went along with the motif of Valley Girl names for these characters or just to make it even more horrible when these pretty, nice-sounding girls did such dastardly things? I'm no Buffy-verse expert, but I don't remember anything like the conflagration that's coming. Talk about jumping from the frying pan to the fire!