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Hi, welcome!

That was a very interesting and mysterious beginning. I'm looking forward to seeing where you're going with this.

smile Good luck with thinking of a title.


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Ooooohhhh...second-season Lois is going to get jealous fast! This should be a fun story! thumbsup


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Oooo-kay! This sounds really intriguing and promising. I like this Chris-girl already.

So... she knows about Clark?
So... she kisses Clark? He loves her?

That's one really interesting twist. And Lois thought Chris was a guy... oh my, this has friction and what-not written all over it. Keep the parts coming. I can't wait to read more!

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What a way to start a story!!
All the mystery. I'm really curious who Chris really is and how Lois is gonna react around her.
And the most important thing what her relationship with Clark is!!

Looking farward to the next part smile


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VERY interesting.

A great start, and I really like the way you write!

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A very interesting premise. What happens next?

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All Clark could do was put the phone back in its cradle and smile at her, as the whole newsroom kept watching and waiting for his reaction.

“I need a hug first before I make any decisions,” Clark said with a teasing smile as he opened his arms for the hug that he was sure was about to come.

Sure enough she came into his arms at an almost run and picked her up easily. God he never knew he could miss someone this much. She hugged him back with equal enthusiasm.

“I’m gonna kiss you, you know”

“I’d be disappointed if you didn’t”

She lowered her mouth to his, and gave him a sweet gentle kiss on the lips, which he responded to, she lifted her head and continued to hug each other.

“Oh god I think I just felt my rib breaking,” she whispered in his ear.

He set her down quickly down and apologized quickly with worry in his eyes.

“Relax I was just teasing!”

“Haha you’re funny” with a serious face.

“I know, I learned that from you.” She said with laughter showing on her face.

“Come on, I want you to meet everyone.” He said as he steered her to the three people who were staring, but turned their gazes away and looking at anything but the couple that were heading their way.
Sorry to quote that whole thing but I just loved it. Its almost exactly like something that has been swimming around my head for a really long time. I'm all giddy about this stiory, cant wait to see where you go with this. Post the nex t part soon.


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So who is this Chris Pratt? Hmm? I'm not sure I like a stranger kissing on my man. I mean, Lois' man, of course. Especially a reporter.

But I'll give part two a go, just to be sure. wink


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Thank you so much for your feedback, everyone!

I'm glad you all like it laugh


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