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This was a good A-plot part, Beth. And a story like yours cries out for a fascinating A-plot, which I don't doubt that you will serve up. But just so you know, I'm here for the B-plot... and I'm so interested in seeing how Lois and Clark's relationship will pan out from the situation you've created for them! So, please, if you don't mind... be back soon with a little more B-plot, OK?

Ann

I've just caught up reading on this and I'm very much enjoying the premise for this story, ie. that Clark's secret is out and it looks like there wont be a miracle intervention to make everyone forget.

Which leads me to agree with Ann, this sort of plot has so much potential to explore the personal ramifications in the lives of the characters, there will obviously be some very far reaching consequences to this revelation and it would be wonderful to see them explored more fully.

Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next bit.

Don't worry, there will be some more B plot coming! The A plot portion had been a little neglected so far and so I needed to play some catch-up with this last part.

Wow! I was really impressed with this part! The A-plot is developing very nicely. And this latest development doesn't bode well for the Daily Planet. I can already see half (or more) of the employees leaving, fearing for their safety.

You've got me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next part!