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Comments: Family Hour 2 #46347 09/20/07 11:19 AM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas ShayneT OP Features Writer
OP ShayneT Features Writer Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 814 Texas	Well, what do you think?

Re: Comments: Family Hour 2 #46348 09/20/07 12:25 PM
Joined: May 2004 Posts: 544 Oregon symbolicangel Columnist
symbolicangel Columnist Joined: May 2004 Posts: 544 Oregon	I think I'm really intrigued! I felt so sorry for Lisa. The poor girl thinks she going loony! And poor Lois, giving up her career and raising a child on her own. I hope that Clark comes into their lives soon. They both need him. I'm looking forward to the next part! Silence is golden. Duct tape is silver. ~Saw it on a T-Shirt.

Re: Comments: Family Hour 2 #46349 09/20/07 01:04 PM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	I have absolutely no time for feedback - really - but I just have to tell you that I love this! Poor Lisa! Poor Lois! Lois has had to give up so much for her child, and Lisa... poor girl. Gradually finding herself becoming impossibly superpowered, and thinking, logically, that she was going crazy, and finding out pretty horrible things about the world, and knowing absolutey nothing about her paternity... that must be horrible beyond belief. Usually, I don't want Clark to become Superman if Lois is not around to inspire him. But this time I'm just so grateful that he has become Superman without her! Now Lois and Lisa finally have a chance to learn who her father is. And Clark finally has a chance to get to meet his daughter! I absolutely love your story, Shayne! Please be back soon with more! Ann

Re: Comments: Family Hour 2 #46350 09/20/07 02:34 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Interesting, Shayne. Very interesting. I was so intrigued by the first snippet that I wrote up part of a scene where Lois and Clark met for the second time. I won't describe it here, but if you want to see it I'll e-mail it to you. Suffice to say that there were complications galore. But it looks like you don't need my piddlin' little ideas. This is going to be a great ride! Can't wait to see where you take this one. Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: Comments: Family Hour 2 #46351 09/20/07 04:08 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	Oh Exorsist, scary movie, that poor poor child! You capture her feelings very well. More soon. Stroke Stroke Stroke (stroking Shayne's Ego for more) Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: Comments: Family Hour 2 #46352 09/23/07 04:33 AM
Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 910 alcyone Features Writer
alcyone Features Writer Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 910	Again, it's really great. I would have never made the connection of thinking you're possessed and the superhearing. Poor girl! I'm still really enjoying this. Thanks so much Shayne! alcyone One loses so many laughs by not laughing at oneself - Sara Jeannette Duncan http://languagelog.ldc.upenn.edu/myl/llog/duty_calls.png

Re: Comments: Family Hour 2 #46353 10/19/07 04:39 PM
Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland Ank. K. S. Top Banana
Ank. K. S. Top Banana Joined: Nov 2003 Posts: 1,441 Likes: 1 Dublin, Ireland	Quote On the screen was a tiny figure in a blue and red outfit. Yay! there's hope.. Shayne, tell Lisa she does not have to worry for much longer (hopefully) If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it. Waking a Miracle by Aria

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