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Please put any comments or recommendations here. Should I continue the story? Let me know.
Thank you!
"Everything is okay in the end... If it's not okay, then it's not the end." ~Anonymous
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Absolutely continue. Sooner is better. Love the story. STOP.
Hmm...giving feedback in the form of a telegraph...not that funny. Still, the sentiment is there. Keep up the good work!
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I'm new here, but I really liked it... I don't think I've seen any other fics dealing with The Eyes Have It. Please continue? 
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Oh, yeah, keep it going! Will Clark get his eyesight back? If so, will he continue to be Superman? Will Lois put two and two together? And if she does, how will she deal with Clark? How will he deal with what he will surely perceive as her pity? Will Clark adjust to being blind or will his frustration boil over into unintended violence? Will he figure out how to use his super-hearing to echo-locate and navigate?
This is a very original premise, and I know I've never seen this angle of "The Eyes Have It" pursued. Please don't stop now, it's just getting really good.
Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around.
- Stephen King, from On Writing
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Oh Clark is such a dope. Love it! More soon. Laura
Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”
Caroline's "Stardust"
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Yes! Great start! Please continue!
~Sheila
I'm a firm believer in the fact that God doesn't put any more on us than we can bear. He does however make us come to Jesus every so often.
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Hi, I'll add my request to the others. Please keep going. You can't leave us with Lois in Metropolis and Clark in Smallville... and a Clark who is blind. Lois is bound to want to know about Clark's 'accident'! So I can see a revelation coming soon. At least, I hope so.  Yours Jenni
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Absolutely, please do continue! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Lisa
lisa in the sky with diamonds
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How interesting! Yes, please continue!
Ann
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Well, I'll chime in with the rest: Please continue this story. I, too, have not yet encountered a story with the same or even a similar premise, so I'm pretty curious what you'll do with it.
Clark's being a lunkhead, Lois is furious and won't let this lie. I can see lots of conflict, angst, revelation and what not in the future and I'd love to read about it. So go, sit down and start typing!
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~Sira.
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Oooh! Please, please continue. I love this story already. The Eyes Have It fics are some of my favorites.  Laura
Thanks to CapeFetish for the awesome icon.
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Definitely want to see this premise played out!
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Thank you all for your encouraging words regarding Zenith. I want to let you know that they were all received and appreciated. Right now I have absolutely no buffer. I will try to update the story as often as possible, but I can not commit to a definite posting schedule. I appreciate your patience and support. Thanks again, clrgard 
"Everything is okay in the end... If it's not okay, then it's not the end." ~Anonymous
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I have just read the first part of this story and I am hoping you will come back and finish it sometime soon! It is well written and has the promise of a good story. Please finish it! 
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