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Yay! I'm the first person to give FDK on this great story!

I just wanted to say that I love where you're taking this. I really like the pacing so far. I don't feel like I'm hanging around waiting for things to happen, yet at the same time you've given lots of good character moments.

But I can't wait for Clark to meet Lois! Will he even like her at first, or will she just come off as a person looking for a story? And how will Clark adjust to living in a normal life? So far he hasn't been given a lot of freedom at Luthor's, but when he does leave (whenever that happens) it will be a huge adjustment for him.

I also liked the part with Martha. She suspects something, that's for sure. I'm hoping to see more of her and Jonathan in the future.

Anyway, I love this story so far. You've got me very interested.

hmmm i reckon it should be the opposite...lois falls in love with clark straight away, but because clark has been 'out of the world' for his whole life, he know nothing about relationships, love, that sort of thing...

Perhaps its a job for Lois Lane to bring him back to reality.

Yeah, a meeting between M&J and Clark later on, with them not knowing each other barely at all.

Damn! I just tried to post some FDK, but it didn't get posted!!!

I just want to say that this is a great premise! I love your smart Lois, who sees thorugh Luthor's facade and realises that he is holding Clark. Please let Lois free Clark!! Please?

I also want to see what part Martha and Jonathan are going to play here.

Okay, I don't have time for more. but now I just hope that this FDK gets posted!!!

Oh, and... if I didn't say it, I love this story!

Ann

Yay, feedback!

Hi Beth:
In some ways, I'm a terrible writer. I tend to miss bits out of stories (sometimes whole sentences - my mind moves faster than my fingers!). I can't seem to write filler scenes to make the time flow properly. The whole story as it is on my hard-drive seems to take a lot less time than it did in my head when I first came up with the plot. Still, so long as it works!

Hi emma:
Hi woody:
Hi Ann:
I'm not saying a word...

Part 3 should be up in a couple of days.

Just to drop you a note that I'm still reading and enjoying! I can't wait for the next part!

alcyone

Thanks alcyone. That's all I need to know!

Klein certainly is bold, prancing into the Daily Planet building like that. I know that Star Labs burned, apparently too much for it to be worked in. Still, I worry about him.

I like Asabi's description of Clark: calm, but stubborn. Still a great story.


Elisabeth