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#48319 11/28/07 06:20 AM
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YAY!!!!! I got a wonderful surprise when I saw this part posted so fast. Shayne, you're great!!!! razz

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She began to prepare a new batch of tea, and as she did, she stirred a pinch of green powder into the mix. It glowed slightly in the darkness of the kitchen, and then faded as Lana brought it into the light.

She wanted a normal child, and that’s what Lisa would remain, even if she had to take her medicine for years.

With any luck, she’d burn the alien contagion right out of her.
Damned witch!! DieLanaDieLanaDieLanaDieLanaDieLana!!! [Linked Image]

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They were going to have a word with Bruno about what had happened to their little girl, and they weren’t going to stop until they got some answers. They were going to do this together, and together they were going to bring Lisa home.
YES!!! I'm dying to see Mad Dog Lane in action! That witch won't know what hit her! [Linked Image]

More, more, soon!!! grovel


"My wife's love is what unites Krypton and Earth in my heart. Without it, without her, I truly would be in hell."

~ Superman: Man of Tomorrow #15
#48320 11/28/07 07:54 AM
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too depressed to comment. You better fix them soon.


Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?”

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#48321 11/28/07 08:36 AM
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UUhh, special treat. Two hours a day.

Poor Lana, though. It was nice knowing her. Her life wasn't pleasant, and now her death will be even more painful. Unleashing Mad Dog Lane with 14 years of pent up investigative juices on another human being. Now isn't that some kind of human rights violation.

Please be back soon with a pulp of Lana.
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#48322 11/28/07 12:53 PM
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Poor Lana. By the time Lois is done with her, she's going to wish she had overdosed on her Botox and Vidocin.

I can't believe she put together that video to manipulate Lisa. I'm just hoping that a kid that is half Lois and half Clark has to be smart enough to not fall into her trap.


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Lois: "Never had a need to find out its meaning."

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#48323 11/28/07 12:54 PM
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I have to agree with Laura, this is about as much as I can take!

Please come back soon and make things better.

Ann

#48324 11/28/07 03:46 PM
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Woohoo...Shayne produced, and it is so good!

Gotta go!

~Sheila


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I loved how both Lois and Clark now think of Lisa as "their" daughter. And they comforted each other. Lana might have a handle on Clark but she's clearly underestimated Lois as well as Lisa.. I hope?

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If she had to move heaven and Earth, perhaps come back to haunt Perry and explain the story after they'd killed her, she would do it.

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#48326 11/28/07 05:37 PM
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When Bruno meets Mad Dog Lane he's going to fold up like last week's laundry. He'll give up Lana just to keep Lois from ripping his head off while Superman stands there whistling Dixie and watching the clouds go by.

Talk about good cop/bad cop. This is angry but restrained parent/insanely furious parent. The fat man's gonna sing like a nightingale.

And I'd bet that Lisa will figure out that Lana's doing something to her and will meet her parents halfway down the mountain. Lana doesn't know that exposure to the green K builds up some resistance to its effects in Kryptonians. Of course, when Lois finds out what Lana's done and confronts her, the meeting with Bruno will look like a tea party by comparison.

Excellent work, Shayne. I'm all but glued to my computer, wondering when the next chapter will be posted.


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- Stephen King, from On Writing

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