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#48456 12/04/07 06:05 PM
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Ah, I really liked this. I'm not really a poem person, but some of your lines were so clever!

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Blaring, Squealing, Siren near,
Superman will soon appear.
Clark he knows he must escape,
Give an excuse, don the cape.
Get's you right into the thick of things at the beginning, I love it. Like the intro to a Superman cartoon or something.

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Lois appears from somewhere,
Takes some notes of this affair.
Where there's criminals, there's Superman...and where there is Superman, there is Lois Lane!

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Just before he could take off,
He heard Lois fake a cough.
So adorable!

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Lois returned to her desk,
(Noted her plant looked grotesque).
Looked across for her farmboy,
Saw him return full of Joy.
“Why weren’t you downtown just now?”
“I had to buy my dad a plow.”
Hahahaha, this is definitely LnC Universe. Love the plant bit, and is the first time we've heard this particular lame excuse? Very creative!

Anyway, adorable poem!

#48457 12/04/07 08:54 PM
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Great! I loved it!

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(Noted her plant looked grotesque)
HA HA HA!

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“I had to buy my dad a plow.”
Why couldn't *they* come up with such an excuse on the show?

You rock! hail


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#48458 12/04/07 10:15 PM
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Wow goofy

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#48459 12/05/07 12:49 PM
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Love the plant bit, and is the first time we've heard this particular lame excuse?
I think it might be, but to be honest, it's his excuse this time purely because it rhymed.
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“I had to buy my dad a plow.”
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Why couldn't *they* come up with such an excuse on the show?
because... ummm... I dunno? lol
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I love that the ending isn't really an ending
I might attempt a sequel later, writing poetry may be my preferred medium, but sometimes you just can't make it go where you want it to.


Don't think about the pink elephant... I dare you!

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I might attempt a sequel later,
Yes! Yes!

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writing poetry may be my preferred medium,
Squeeee!!!! laugh I think *your* poetries might really be a nice change!

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but sometimes you just can't make it go where you want it to.
You can! You can! Remember? you already did! This one's fabulous! thumbsup


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#48461 12/06/07 02:54 PM
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Nice poem, but I didn't notice the actual revelation in there. Me thinks thats bait and switch, although I might be dissuaded from calling the cops if there was a sequel.

Elisabeth

#48462 12/06/07 03:18 PM
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Nice poem, but I didn't notice the actual revelation in there. Me thinks thats bait and switch, although I might be dissuaded from calling the cops if there was a sequel
At a loss for a better name for this one, I decided on revelation, because thats what is going to happen next, when I write the sequel. For now, I'm working on finishing up Bullying, to be posted ASAP.


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#48463 12/07/07 12:04 PM
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“I had to buy my dad a plow.”
Ok, I know everyone's already mentioned it, but that's a hoot! thumbsup


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