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If you want to, that is!

- Alisha

Yay! More of Specimen!

I loved this part. (okay I've loved all parts so far, but still) I love how Lois is attracted to Clark, the way you've depicted Clark's awkwardness is very good. I love that even though Clark spent most of his life locked up he's still able to act independently, and I imagine he'll be more than a match for Lois!

And they're going to Smallville!!!!

I'm looking forward to Clark meeting Martha and Jonathan

I like Clark in Lois' glasses; not only because he's SUPPOSED to wear them, but because I see them as these half sized, blue framed glasses that REALLY don't suit him.

I'm really liking this one...

I laughed all the way through this part. It's really great. There's way too much to quote, but suffice it to say that the glasses as a disguise was snort-out-loud funny (you can ask James) and I continued laughing as she realised he had been in her bedroom, but hadn't looked at her underwear.

I can't wait to hear Cat's comments on the situation. I also can't wait to hear what excuses Perry gives her for taking that much time off of work.

Elisabeth
who can't believe I've never read anything from you before

Really sorry, Alisha, I posted feedback for another story in your thread!

But this is great! I absolutely love the interaction between Clark and Lois here. Clark is so honestly innocent and confused, and Lois is so... well, she is refreshingly different. She is not taken in by Luthor at all and she isn't walking all over Clark! Just the opposite, in fact!

Aaaaaawwwwww!!!!! *sniffle*

I can just see Clark in Lois's glasses! Hah!

And now they're off for Smallville. Why does this make me think of the Wizard of Oz? "We're off to see the Wizard, the wonderful wizard off Oz...." "Lois, I don't think we're in Kansas anymore." "Oh, but we are, Clark. That's where we are."

Hurry back with the next part, please!!!

Ann

I'm in. More soon please.

Yay Smallville. Looking forward to Lois and Clark's interaction during the journey.. or if not.. then Martha and Jonathan's meeting with Clark.. long-lost son.

Superb, loving it!

Wow, thanks again for all the feedback!

Hi Beth Ah, thank you, you've made me blush (in case you didn't know what blushing looked like - although I'm fairly sure you do!)

Hi sara Yep, that's pretty much how I visualised them too!

Hi Elisabeth That's probably because 1: this was the first story I actually had an ending for and 2: I'm very shy and don't normally let people read what I write. I think I'm only brave enough to post here because I'm not me, I'm Alisha Knight, who can be a bit braver than the real me! (Alisha really hopes she hasn't shocked everyone with this news. Come on, you didn't think I'd have my *real* full name as my display name, did you?) Oh, and also 'cause this is kinda my first fanfic!
Also, I'd like to thank you for your fdk on the other parts. Yes, you're right, Klein has been rather, um, bold (something I didn't really think about at the time) but, after further thought, I think it does fit his character so I'm not going to loose sleep over it! Don't take this as a sign to stop worrying about him, though...

Hi Ann Additional disclaimer: Much to the horror of one of my friends, I have never watched (all of) the Wizard of Oz! Maybe it's something I'll do over xmas.

Hi TJ. I will get the next part up ASAP. Speaking of, isn't there some little story you're writing that's due for a new part....?

Hi AnKS. Wow, three thumbs up! I don't know that it's *that* good!

Cheers guys
- Alisha