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FDK: Their first Christmas #48744 12/25/07 08:02 AM
Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 2,292 Germany Lara Joelle Kent OP Kerth
OP Lara Joelle Kent Kerth Joined: Sep 2006 Posts: 2,292 Germany	Wow, for me? Thank you! I know how busy you are, so... well, thank you! Pity. The only known quantity that moves faster than light is the office grapevine. (from Nan's fabulous Home series)

Re: FDK: Their first Christmas #48745 12/25/07 04:12 PM
Joined: Dec 2006 Posts: 655 Z Zoar3 Columnist
Zoar3 Columnist Z Joined: Dec 2006 Posts: 655	Definitely warrants a sequel, Lara. Very orginal, Bakasi, good job. Mona

Re: FDK: Their first Christmas #48746 12/25/07 05:44 PM
Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 113 Likes: 1 Mercy Hack from Nowheresville
Mercy Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 113 Likes: 1	Ooo--I love stories like these, the early relationship stuff that deals with Lois and her superhero crush. And this piece was so sweet! Lois really does have Clark wrapped around her finger, even if she doesn't know it. And then, just when I was about to find out what Lois does to make Superman's "first" Christmas special... the end? Surely the page loaded incorrectly. Or the internet ran out of screen space?? Anything but the end! Sequel!!

Re: FDK: Their first Christmas #48747 12/25/07 11:09 PM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	Beautiful, Barbara, and it's great to have you back! This is my favorite passage from you new vignette: Quote “You shouldn't be alone on Christmas,” Lois said suddenly. She didn't know why she just couldn't keep her tongue in check. What was it about Superman that she felt so drawn towards him? His powers, her mind whispered. But Lois felt that there was more to him, than that. He looked kind of lonely. She didn't exactly like Christmas, but suddenly she couldn't stand the thought that he would spend that day alone on a cloud, or wherever he lived. Lovely. We so often see Lois being lonely on Christmas, and Clark coming to her rescue. Those stories are lovely. But this is the first time when Lois thinks that Superman is lonely on Christmas, and she invites him to stay with her. Not primarily because she is star-struck and infatuated, but because she wants to make his Christmas a little brighter. Lovely! Welcome back with more stories. Ann

Re: FDK: Their first Christmas #48748 12/26/07 02:25 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31	Applauds Lois showing Superman how it's done at Christmas - ahm, bad grammar, sorry. How Christmas is done. Could be an interesting: "How the Grinch showed the Novice Christmas" And Superman would have to carefully watch each step and take her to Smallville when the Christmas kitsch gets to too much even for him. giggles evilly Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Their first Christmas #48749 12/26/07 06:38 AM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ... E Elisabeth Merriwether
Elisabeth Merriwether E Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ...	Beautiful ending, as well. I love how it leaves you wanting just a few breaths more. Elisabeth

Re: FDK: Their first Christmas #48750 12/26/07 08:47 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,638 Likes: 45 Germany bakasi Pulitzer
bakasi Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 2,638 Likes: 45 Germany	Thanks for all the nice feedback. It's great to be back with something, even if it's just a tiny piece. Darth Micheal, you're title sounds quite promising, but I wouldn't compare Lois to the Grinch. Well, honestly I don't know exactly who this Grinch is I guess I'm not the person to say such a thing. However, I'm glad you liked this one, Lara. It's never too dark to be cool.

Re: FDK: Their first Christmas #48751 12/26/07 09:55 PM
Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State Classicalla Pulitzer
Classicalla Pulitzer Joined: Jun 2006 Posts: 3,166 The Bluegrass State	Awww, what a sweet story, Barbara. (And I still need a transporter, don't I? Darn it all.) ~~Even heroes have the right to dream.~~

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