I love, love, love it when new writer's post on the boards.
I'm with everyone else. This is definitely worth finishing. IMO, one of the best parts of the L&C community is how well we bounce ideas off of each other. I ALWAYS share my fic with my hubby, but if you want a beta reader as well, send me a PM. To me, it just makes the writing process more fun.
Either way, keep up the story.
Elisabeth