Originally posted by Beth S.:
Michael, you certainly started this fic off with a bang!
This was amazing for your first kick at the can.
Thanks Beth.
Originally posted by Beth S.:
I liked to see Lois' perspectives on her previous relationships, although I hope eventually she'll see how Clark is different.
Which begs the question, does the observation change the outcome?
Originally posted by Beth S.:
I'm very interested to see where you're going to take this. Just how is Lois going to get even with Clark?
Now, now, that would be telling, now wouldn't it? But I think I can safely tell you that I will explore this subject in greater depth in part two.
Originally posted by Terry Leatherwood:
Clarkie's in trouble, Clarkie's in trouble! Ha-ha-ha-ha-ha! Nyah-nyah-nyah-nyah-nyah!
Terry, is this just me or do you sort of cheer for a bit of punishment to be exacted on Clark?
Originally posted by Terry Leatherwood:
This is going to be interesting. I wonder how long she'll stay this furious. Maybe, about one part less than the whole story?
Maybe. Muse has yet to let me in on this particular subject
Originally posted by Terry Leatherwood:
Or will the story end with Lois still mad at Clark? Wouldn't that be a switch!
Now do I look like Tank?
*Glances at Muse*
"Don't look at me" :blushes:
"Mu-use?!"
I love all the wonderful feedback, Michael