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I have no idea how you plan on finishing this in only two parts. I'm hoping each of the final parts will be sixty pages long so that the reader isn't left hanging.

Poor, stupid Clark is jumping to all the wrong conclusions. I hope the deal he made isn't rash. Just by making a deal he has already sold himself out.

Your version of Luthor is scary. He's ruthless. Jimmy may say that Lois is heartless, but he doesn't know the half of it.


Elisabeth

A clone? You have two parts left and you are going to introduce a clone?


BTW Interesting part.

A little too A-plotty for me to be able to really concentrate, but the B-plot is definitely interesting. Poor Clark, he thinks that Lois has betrayed him! I sure hope he'll find out soon that she hasn't. And will it be possible to take care of Luthor and the Thompson guy and the other remains of Bureau 39 in only two more parts? And, oh boy, how will Clark be able to make the transition into "a normal citizen" from a "specimen" in the same short amount of space?

Ann

I loved Mitchell! His little allergy rant was so funny.

The impression I got from the hair line was that Lex just messed up her hairstyle. He didn't actually steal any from her.

I'm really looking forward to seeing how you're going to finish this!

Aw, I'm glad that Mitchell is actually a nice guy.

Nice job integrating the pilot into your alternate universe!

Thanks for all your comments, guys.

Oh dear. Well, I can certainly tell you that the final parts are not sixty pages long, even together. More than that I am not prepared to confirm or deny.

I was going to leave you hanging and not answer that , but as Beth pointed out, all Luthor did was mess up her hair. This story is 100% clone-free. I promise.