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FDK: Showing Off #51558 04/23/08 09:35 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO C carolm OP Pulitzer
OP carolm Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO	Very fun . Loved seeing different reactions to Clark's little show. Leo Nunk was especially fun! The only thing that pulled me out what that Kryptonian pregnancies were a few months shorter than human ones. If that was the case, I can't see Lois being at a hospital but rather a home birth with Martha or something. However, if they were a few WEEKS shorter, then little Lara could be born early and healthy with no real suspicions. My DS was born 30 days early last summer and we were all surprised he didn't spend at least a little bit of time in the NICU. Much earlier than that and a very healthy baby would probably lead to suspicions. But, I digress... I loved that Jimmy and Perry know - of course Perry knew! - and Jimmy's reaction to the cigar. And Clark probably would bring in Cubans for this occasion . Can't wait for the next one!!! And isn't there a new 'Lois has powers' one coming?!? Carol My articles Debt Free Blog: Normal is BROKE! Be Weird! - Under Construction

Re: FDK: Showing Off #51559 04/23/08 09:59 AM
Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 700 Beth S. Columnist
Beth S. Columnist Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 700	Kevin, this was great! Like Carol, I also loved Jimmy's reaction to the cigar.

Re: FDK: Showing Off #51560 04/23/08 10:25 AM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397 bellarase Beat Reporter
bellarase Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397	oh that was great! LOIS:I don't like you. MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either. LOIS: That makes me feel so much better

Re: FDK: Showing Off #51561 04/23/08 10:43 AM
Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida Queen of the Capes Pulitzer
Queen of the Capes Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2003 Posts: 3,060 Likes: 20 Florida	Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! ~•~

Re: FDK: Showing Off #51562 04/23/08 10:53 AM
Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,445 London, England Marcus Rowland Kerth
Marcus Rowland Kerth Joined: Dec 2005 Posts: 2,445 London, England	Cute! You forgot the scene where astronomers who have waited months to get time on one of the big telescopes curse Clark because his antics have ruined the evening's work... Marcus L. Rowland Forgotten Futures, The Scientific Romance Role Playing Game

Re: FDK: Showing Off #51563 04/23/08 11:52 AM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ... E Elisabeth Merriwether
Elisabeth Merriwether E Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ...	Pretty cynical group you wrote for us. I imagine it would be pretty difficult to summon an alien army with pyrotechnics. But they're all daft anyhow. Elisabeth

Re: FDK: Showing Off #51564 04/23/08 02:42 PM
Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797 T TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner
TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	Yes, I can imagine how Clark's antics would ruin everything for astronomers! Otherwise you were clearly setting this up for something scarily A-plotty. Good thing you started the ficlet off with Jonathan and Martha Kent and ended it with Lois and Lara! I just loved this part: Quote “That's your Daddy, Lara. He's the nice man that's been holding you ever since I did all the work, lived through the pain and labored to bring you into the world, while he just stood there being invulnerable." I just loved this, too: Quote Lois knew that Lara couldn't see her Daddy, of course. From what she and Clark had read, babies couldn't even focus their eyes right away, so of course Superman was out of focus to the infant. Still, the books had also said that the baby's eyes would be blue or gray at first and nothing like Lara's, a bright shamrock green. Looking again at her daughter, Lois would swear she saw her smile upwards at the heavens. Wonderful! Ann

Re: FDK: Showing Off #51565 04/28/08 02:50 PM
Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA T Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer
Terry Leatherwood Pulitzer T Joined: Jun 2004 Posts: 3,147 Likes: 3 Southwest USA	Well, I liked it. I thought it was very sweet. And I really liked the glimpses into the minds of so many different characters. I wonder what Col. Haskins would do if he found out that Superman was a daddy! (Probably order a launch of every missile he could control.) And the thought that Superman was signaling the invasion fleet was a hoot. This guy is seriously paranoid. And the insight into Luthor's current circumstances was priceless. "A bottle of water, please. Thank you, Bruno." Okay, I'm ready for the next installment. And it better be at least as precious as this one is. Life isn't a support system for writing. It's the other way around. - Stephen King, from On Writing

Re: FDK: Showing Off #51566 04/28/08 02:53 PM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ... E Elisabeth Merriwether
Elisabeth Merriwether E Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ...	Don't get me wrong. I liked the story. It's the half-cocked characters that have me rolling my eyes. Dimwits--all of them. Elisabeth

Re: FDK: Showing Off #51567 05/02/08 07:46 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31	Kevin, I really liked this POV on the Aurora Kryptonis. But where were the Lanes? Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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