Thanks everyone for the lovely FDK! It truly is a motivation for continuing the story, which has just grown by leaps and bounds in my mind. I'm a little flustered with the third part right now, so reading your kind words really helps me out.
Beth - Jenna and Daniel being married...I'm not sure where that even came from. It took me quite by surprise when it fell from my fingertips as I was writing, but it really works for the story. I'm glad you like their relationship
Carol - Well, from what I've read in LtL, I can see how you feel about "Call me Daniel" :p . A series in the making? Sheesh! Did you steal my notebook?
Ann - I'm glad you like Jenna, too. I was not sure how she'd be received. Lois babble writing is fun for me. My rules for writing Lois' babble are:
1. Write a paragraph
2. Remove all the periods
3. Read aloud to see if the entire run-on sentence can be spoken in one breath.
4. If it can, add more. If it can't, mission accomplished
Elisabeth - It's true, our Lois would never consider "flight" as an option. This Lois has been through a lot, the poor girl. But those brain tingles can really do some magic too...
Thanks again, everyone! I hope to have part three posted over the weekend.
But they don't get to spend much time together, which is sad. The only solution I can see is for Lois to be able to come out of hiding, letting Jenna live her own life. So I think a little Lane and Kent action is in order. 
