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I'm enjoying every word. I'm glad that he answered her questions, that she poured her heart out to him and that she inexplicably believes him.


Elisabeth

And *you* left us there?!?!

What happened to Lois?!?!

More soon. Now would be good.

Carol [who most definitely did NOT look in your notebook]

Nice story thus far. Good stopping point. Take your time about pointing the next part. I'd rather see a good long detailed part than some short bits.

Ignore Carol, anyone who can end part of her own tale with is clearly living in a glass house.

Part 3 of 4? You sure you mean 4 not 14 or 24 or 34?

Interesting, I'm in. Laura

HEY!!!!

/me looks around... there's a window... a sliding glass door... there's another window in the basement and five upstairs with another glass door but no, the rest of it is brick and wood and siding and drywall and stuff.

Carol [who absolutely does *not* resemble that remark]

I was moved by how terrified she was of him, but also by how ready she was to believe in him after he told her about the other Lois from the other dimension.

I think you have a wonderful way of describing how Clark affects this Lois. Eleven years of hiding has made Lois so paranoid, but she and Clark have a connection that breaks down all her walls.

I loved how Lois injured her finger by poking it into his chest, and how you showed us how her finger gave her trouble in the rest of this part. For example, she wouldn't shake hands with Clark, and he felt all guilty, even though it wasn't his fault that Lois had accusingly poked him in the chest!

Ann

Thanks everyone for the feedback! It's a joy to log on and read all these kind words.

Yes, this is part 3 of only 4. I only intended this story to be a short reply to "Monday" and it has already grown beyond what I was expecting to write. I just wanted to tell Lois' side of the story to give an explanation of where she has been all these years. I'm afraid you're not going to find any sort of length or A-plot here.

Thanks, everyone!