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Hey, give me some credit, guys. I'm not going to have Lois sleep with Claude while under the influence of the pheromone compound! I mean that's just... ick

ML

ML I just hit refresh and saw this. I just had to check on Claude. Don't have time to read the rest right now (Clark is introspecting on page 5 and not finished yet), but this cliffhanger couldn't wait.

And O M G.

This is perfect yes. Lo-is Ki-icks Claude! Lo-is Ki-icks Claude! Lo-is Ki-icks Claude! Lo-is Ki-icks Claude! And right where it hurts.
ML, thank you so very much. Lois is still our Lois.

But as far as credit is concerned. I *did* read Echoes of the Past. And what you did to Lois (soul) there was just to mean to be even spelled out here. This was just so WHAMMY. And so, no, I would have fully expected you to do this to our poor, sweet, helpless (ok, not helpless, but Clark-less) Lois.

Michael, who will read this tomorrow morning or something like that.

ok, so its still torture, ahhhhhhh! but i love it, more please?

ML - don't have more time because I have company, but anytime you want to put it in my inbox, you can.

So Lois thinks Clark spent two days taking advantage of her. Great.

More now. Or inbox...

Carol

Superb twist(s)

I have a feeling Lois will hate Clark more because he rejected her. Or maybe she starts trusting him, huh?

Loved how they still called each other by last names even while kissing..

What exactly happened? And Clark doesn't remember much about it. Hopefully Jimmy will come up with the interview file and shed some light on it. What did Clark do... break more than Perry's hand?

Excellent story

Man, I am grateful that you didn't show us Claude sex.

I was surprised to see that Clark and Lois had an encounter while she was altered.

Please tell us what Clark did to tick off the Planet staff.

Glad that the Claude incident didn't happen. But I'm so curious about the interview. Why would it have gone differently?

Okay, now that I've read it. ML, that Pheromone episode was unbelievable. But why, oh why, did Clark have to notice that Lois eyes looked dilated. She was just excited, not drugged.

Michael

PS: More please

so, we get another little hint...followed by alot of charged torture.

I nominate MLT for the most author of 2008

James

Squee! I just knew you wouldn't do that to us. I'm not surprised, however, that they conveniently forget the things the author wants to remain hidden.


Elisabeth
BTW, you should have an award for triggering 2 alarms on that dang parental monitoring software I didn't mean to install. That's a record so far.

I, for one, will take an encounter between Lois and Clark any way I can get it, even if it's interrupted.

I suppose Lois *could* get even more angry with Clark about 'taking advantage' of her, but I hope that she'll go the other way. She might just start to see the good in Clark because he stopped and specifically *didn't* take advantage of her once he knew something was wrong. Could she start to wonder about Clark's feelings for her? Could she start to admit to a teeny-tiny, infintisimal glimmer of what might be called attraction she feels for Clark? I have high hopes that they've started a romance in secret, while maintaining the public rivalry.

Hey, a girl can hope, can't she?

I also hope that they find out quickly about Clark's interview and the subsequent issue with Perry. I think Lois missed a great opportunity when Jimmy mentioned it previously. I don't expect that ML will give it to us anytime soon, though. That would end the tale prematurely and she is too

BJ

I take it you liked that section, Michael

Well, I figured if she could track him down at his apartment in our reality to do that dance of the seven veils, she could track him down in this reality. Seems to me that Lois knew exactly what she wanted when she was under the influence of the pheromone spray. After all, in our reality, she didn't yell for Superman or jump off the nearest high building - she tracked down Clark.

Hey, maybe that's what I should say about this story in the story description: A Lois and Clark story that gives little hints... followed by alot of charged torture.

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Good. So it's not just my imagination that this part had more sexual energy than some of the more explicit stuff I've seen on the dark side. I don't think you've stepped over the line, at least as far as explicit stuff goes. But then, you should see what I've cut from my PG-13 version / reworded stuff so it's all nice and tame and happy and not over the line (/me is a terrible PG-13 judge).

Anyway, please if you are really concerned about steamier parts. There is always the option of posting special versions of the parts with more *interesting* scenes. (You know what I'm talking about )

And if you just post the way you did #10, well, that's very fine too, for it is something to behold, study and learn from in the way of writing fics

Big BUT though: What do you mean by "Lois and Clark or Lane and Kent" Shouldn't that be an and in there. And what happens if at some point we see Lane and Clark? I do fully expect you to lower yourself to this evilness, ML.

Michael

I considered doing an nfic version, Michael. In fact, in the original version of this story, I had notes to myself all through it that said: "If I do an nfic version, add more here."

But in the end, I decided it wasn't necessary. I figured there was enough steam in this story without taking it to the next level. And it really wouldn't have added anything to the story line.

Anyway, I'm off now to post the next part.

ML