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So here's the next part. Hope you enjoy it.

ML

At least there isn't any Lois making out with Claude or Clark making out with Toni Taylor or Antoinette Baines or Lana or Cat or whoever.

It's interesting that Klein figured out Clark. Of course, inquiring minds also want to know how many other people he told. Surely Klein knows that discretion is the better part of valor and kept his mouth shut.

So, whenever you want to stick this in my inbox, you're welcome to .

Carol

So Klein knows about Clark and he told others. Wow Clark must be freaked out.

Please tell us what happened for the Planet staff to hate Clark that is killing me to know!

I enjoyed this chapter very much. I have no idea how long the story will be and I'm trying not to be impatient, but couldn't we have just a *bit* more about that first meeting a year ago? And what happened with Perry during his interview?

This, however, sounds suspiciously like a clue... Ah, so Clark met with Doctor Klein before, and much sooner in this new reality than in the old. Hmm.

I was glad to see Lois go to Clark's when she was scared. The strong feeling of safety Lois felt at Clark's place is interesting. Maybe, somehow, their other selves experienced double memories as well, like the old reality also bled into the new... I wonder if Lane will have some memories of having a child or wanting a child or something...

Time travel conundrums - Is now a good time to start thinking about penguins?

Great job, ML. More soon, please.
Brenda

Great chapter! I loved seeing Lois go to Clark, although I was sad to see her run away in the end. It seems like they take one step forward and then two steps back in this reality.

Darn! Didn't you recieve it yet?

PSYC!!!! (hope I spelled that right)

Read Chapter 14 and following. Oh, wait. Sorry. It hasn't been posted yet

Wow! It's a good thing Lois and Clark are rivals in this reality, otherwise Lois'd be pretty miffed that someone else knows his secret first

Hi ML,

Sorry my fdk will be short, but I'm still reading and still loving every moment.

It's very clever how you've changed the episodes to suit this new altered-reality. I'm just hoping we get our Lois and Clark back eventually.

Yours Jenni

This brings up a point, Jenni. If you, or anyone else, notice a change to the series that doesn't seem to make sense given the single change I made to the past, please let me know. Now, since you don't yet know what that change is, that could be difficult. But if something doesn't seem right, please mention it. I might end up saying that it will all make sense in the end. On the other hand, it could also be a mistake - so please mention it so that I have a chance to correct it.

ML

Sorry I'm late ML. Great chapter 12. Poor Lois. Poor Clark. Yay, Doc Klein. And I have a feeling that LnC either remember themselves from 1992 when they broke into StarLabs or LnC had been interrogated afterwards.

Michael, who is happy to see part 13 is up already.