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Dandello,

That was so good. I mean chilling at the end, but I really liked the twists on the original episode here. The way Lex has used Clark's therapy to destroy him and his connection with Lois is really brilliant.

I can't wait to see this develop!

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“Jack’s dead,” Clark said....

“Who would do this?” Lois asked.

“You have to ask?” Clark said. “The question is who is Luthor going to frame for it?” ....

“No mistake. The police found the explosives he used to make the device hidden in his apartment,” Luthor said. “And you, of all people, should be aware of his mental instability.”

Clark didn’t say a word as the two officers put him in the back of one of the squad cars.
Well played.


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I never guessed that Clark would be blamed for the bombing! I'm really worried about Lois though. It's never good news for her when she accepts Luthor's proposal.

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Ack! You killed Jack and made Clark the framee. Wow, that's ... brilliant! I loved the changes you made and although I'm not happy that Clark is in jail, it's fascinating to see everyone working together - that Lex as "the Boss" is common knowledge to the whole group.

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Cox seemed amused by the accusation. “Not me. But if you’ll take a little advice from someone who’s been there… take the ring, climb into his bed, and graciously accept his settlement when he realizes you’re just like all the other sluts he’s wooed and screwed.”

“Like you?” Lois challenged.

Cox chuckled. “I have other talents he appreciates, but yes. Like me.” The elevator doors opened. “Just remember what I said, Miss Lane. No one tells Lex Luthor ‘no’. No one.”
Whoa. I can't quite tell if Mrs. Cox is threatening Lois or if she's warning her with a dash of pity. Nicely written.

I still suspect that Luthor knows about Clark's alter-ego and that's why he pinned the bombing on him. In the original BatP, Lex didn't consider Clark worth worrying about, but without Superman, he's proven to be so much stronger than Lex expected. And assertive. Ever since the planning of Superman's funeral, Clark has been a bigger nuisance to Luthor. I suppose it's not a surprise he was targeted.

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The area beyond was a pallid green.
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More pallid green.
eek Kryptonite on the walls of the jail? No wonder they were able to get a blood test.

Scary about the psychic attack. Sounds like the work of Baron Sunday.

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Dandello, so many questions. *Is* the green green-K? And just how evil can you be to use the soul-mates thing to bring Lois and Luthor together. And Mrs Cox telling Lois to just shut it and spread wide was wow.

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