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Okay, that's all folks...

Yes, there will probably be a major rewrite before it goes to the archives.

Two parts at once! My reward for not checking in the morning.

So she did marry Luthor! Yeah, yeah, it wasn't legal, but she thought it was, and she said "I do." I'm glad the cavalry arrived soon, though. The mysterious honeymoon had me worried. And what possessed Luthor to think Lois would murder anyone for him, let alone Clark?

BTW, nice touch with Mayson defending Superman. That was really cool.

Oh, and Superman's back, but we all saw that coming.

Thanks for the tale!

Oh, I think the the last chapter rewrite may be sooner than later.

Let's just say for now that Luthor was too nuts to stand trial. There's a room in some hospital for the criminally insane out there with his name on it.

Nice little ending to the story. Thanks. Laura

</font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by Dandello:
<strong>Let's just say for now that Luthor was too nuts to stand trial. There's a room in some hospital for the criminally insane out there with his name on it.


I admit, the ending was a bit anti-climatic, but I really liked it.

One question though: How could Luthor forget about a marriage license? Or was it on purpose on his part. As in as long as Lois doesn't know and he ships her off to the alps, no harm's done.

Michael

PS: Are you going to clear the record again, now that this one's finished?

Or had he thought he was above the law? Or had he delegated the task to someone who deliberately dropped the ball...?

More points for the rewrite.

I had originally considered having the marriage be legal but unconsummated, allowing Lois to get an annulment if she wanted. But I didn't want to write another entire story on Lois being in charge of the Luthor fortune. Other writers have covered that and have done an excellent job.

Any other loose ends?

While in the shower this morning Little Lois finally told me what happened with Luthor
So there's hope.