Aaaa… poor little Jay and Kaylie! How old were they at the time of their mother passing? I was guessing six because of the baby book comment. Blue and Red, lol, couldn’t be any other colors. I thought their mother would say her favorite color was yellow, but I liked the purple answer she gave them.
Ellie acted really crazy, when I read part seven, I thought that she had injected herself with kryptonite, or something. Like when Clark kissed Diana. But then Jay found the necklace I realized it would have been crazy, even for Ellie.
I liked Jay concerned about Ellie.
Why had she even tried this in the first place? Did I really seem that anxious to jump in the sack with her?
I was getting the same impression Ellie got. I don’t know if it was because of the double point of view, or just because you write Jay so cold and distant. But I was feeling like he was getting annoyed by their relationship problems.
I said it before, and I’ll say it again. Ellie needs to talk to her parents, not just with her aunt. When she talked to Clark on the previous part I was praying for her to tell him her problem, but she didn’t. Well, it seems like she can’t ignore the issue anymore, she has backed herself into a corner.
Anyway, very good part!
I really want to know what happens next. I’m anxious for “the talk”, and Jay is going to be there. I wonder what Lois and Clark are going to think when a very nervous Ellie tells them that she and Jay have something important to tell them. I can even picture Lois flipping out “Oh, my God, you are pregnant, aren’t you?!”
It could be fun. I just can’t wait for next Friday.
