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Barbara, I loved how Lois is waking up to Clark. That was just so awwwww.

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This part includes a WHAM. I thought I should warn you.
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Superman was dead.
*pulls on cigar while swiveling around in leather chair.*

Me: "I haven't seen a single wham in there, Nigel. Have you?"

Nigel: No, Sir. Superman is dead.

Me: You're right. Superman is dead and everything is alright in world.

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Excellent story. I loved this part. It's so interesting to see Clark with Lois, even when he doesn't remember anything.

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So the Queen of Cliffhanger is back. :-) You know I love this story with all my heart.

So where are the wild theories? Why is he dead?

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Hey this is really getting good. More soon. Laura


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Great part, Barbara!

I absolutely loved the tender waffy scene between Lois and Clark in bed in the morning. It was incredibly sweet and lovely.

There is something disturbing and ominous about Lois and Clark's dreams. I remember Lois's dream from the previous version of this story, where she also dreamed that Superman killed Clark. In addition I also remember the news that Superman was found dead, although if you say that Superman has not been split off from Clark and does not have a separate existence, then it is clear that the man in the valley in the Superman suit isn't Superman. The question is, of course, who he would be. Why would he wear the Superman suit? And why is he dead? Is there someone - Lex??? - who wants to make the world believe that Superman is dead?

Clark's dream was really scary. I don't remember it from the previous version of this story, although that may be because my memory is faulty. Anyway, Clark most definitely dreams of being exposed to kryptonite. Clark doesn't remember that he is Superman, and he doesn't seem to know what kryptonite is, although he does remember the pain it brings:

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Instead of getting information he had been welcomed by an all too familiar wave of pain.
Clark's dream seems to be built on jumbled memories. It does seem as if he was lured into a trap, where he was subjected to kryptonite and was captured. Well, that explains why Clark has no powers, because we know that kryptonite can rob him of his powers for a long time. And the reason for why he is hurt could be that he got his injuries while he was escaping.

Indeed, mysteries abound! Come back soon with the next part!

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Thanks for your nice feedback.

You're right, Ann. Clark's dream was not part of the former version of this story. Neither were the Henderson and Jonathan and Martha parts.

Instead, Superman had been witnessed doing cruel things. I removed that, because it made the story so complicated. The idea had helped me create this story, but it had out-lived its usefulness, so to speak.

Michael, I love your comment about Lex Luthor. It was hilarious and so very in character. clap


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