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Okay, so here's the next part. Hope you enjoy it.

ML

*sigh*

At least there was no Mayson. That's about all I can say for it...

Other than that - there's Dan smoochies *shudder*. And no word on what Jimmy may or may not have told Perry. And Dan's not dead. *sigh* And Clark won't die. So that's not a really cliffhanger because then Martha and Jonathan would have *really* freaked out when he and Lois showed up. And so would the Planet staff. They would have had a hoe down shin dig when Clark died, even if Lois had been in jeopardy.

*narrows eyes* Does this mean that Dan saves the day?!?!? No!

I did see someone else mention that TF didn't happen here. But if there's no Superman, there's no need for Tempus to destroy him, but the idea that maybe someone else managed to screw up the past is an interesting one.

That said... if you want to send the file to that special ML FIC box, I'd be more than happy to help you edit it.

Carol [who hasn't bothered to check and see how long she thinks this is going to be yet, but who thinks ML should post again, like now]

She's still doing chaste kisses to the cheek.
She would still have turned away from him.
Now we're talking...
Told ya.

Good, we're right on schedule. Next part they will have a falling out, Dan will beat it when her Irish ex shows up and then we're off to Just Say Noah. You know, ML, once I stopped believing in cliffhangers, it's so much more fun.



Michael

PS: This does not mean that I would complain if you posted part 30 now. Or now. How about now? Now? Okay, now it is. Right? Come on it's been *hours* since you posted part 29. So how about you post when you get up Sunday morning?

Pleeeeeease post the next part today?
We really need to find out how they escape. I don't care even if it is Dan, I suppose he needs to have at least some use Anyway, Lois was clearly more upset at the prospect of Clark being killed than she was at the though of no more Dan! Yay!!

You left us there? Clark with no powers and Lois with no visable means of support?


More soon please!

I'm sad that it was Dan who was on the island with Lois. I love that episode, and it was disappointing to see Dan usurp Clark's place, even though it was just at the beginning. However, they ended up together after all, so I guess I can't be too disappointed. It seems that no matter how hard these two try, they still end up together. Which makes me happy.

So when do they ditch Dan and Mayson? I was patient for a while, but now I'm anxious for those two to be gone!

I'm not sure why everyone is so concerned that "Lane" and "Kent" are currently dating Dan and Mayson. Not that I actually think that they should be dating, or that I like to see them together or anything.

But the purpose of this story (to me, anyway)is not to see Lois and Clark get together in this altered reality. It's to find out what's wrong so they can get back to their proper reality.

I have to say I'm a lot more concerned about Jimmy telling Perry about what he's seen/heard. Like I said before, he thinks "Kent" is taking advantage of Lois.
But if that happens, Perry is likely to throw Clark out. Then they would have to choose between being seperated or not using Planet resources.

Sara

Superb. So is it Inspector Gadget... Agent Scardino to the rescue? Will this incident be enough for Lois and Dan to break up? Whatever happened to Mayson-Clark.. they've already become distant, right? Or maybe in this reality's Just Say Noah, we'll have two couples (Lois & Dan, Clark & Mayson) visiting the retreat.

And I thought you said there was no cliff hanger this time, Carol

Well, let's see if we can do something about that

Well, there really wasn't. Neither one were going to die. If so, then either the Planet folks or M/J would have died from shock. Now Dan could have died and that would be okay... .

Carol