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I like the line about how Martha can keep it together even in a crisis. Don't you just love people like that? The world would fall apart without them.

I think it's brilliant that they're hiding in plain sight. Although, if they weren't trying to solve the murder, I think hiding in a little out-of-the-way place in Italy would sound like a better idea.

I still am hoping you don't leave us hanging in the next part. It seems like an awful lot to sum up in one part, even if Clark does eventually try on the suit.

By the way, there's a little voice in the back of my mind saying, "Try on the suit! Try on the suit! Try on the suit! TRY ON THE SUIT!"


Elisabeth

This was another very good chapter. My favorite part was when Lois placed soft kisses on Clark and made him fly. You give Lois and Clark's love a sweet sensuality that I find irresistible.

Like Elisabeth, I enjoyed the portrayal of Martha here. Isn't it great when people can keep their heads and stay calm and do the right thing when they need to? Way to go, Martha!

Also like Elisabeth, I'm eagerly waiting for Clark to put on his suit. I can imagine Lois instructing him to take off his glasses, and I can just picture how incredibly reluctant he will be to do so! But I think she will give him no choice. And then she will slick back his hair, and... watch Lois and Clark as Superman is staring back at them through Clark's eyes!!!!

Also like Elisabeth, I wonder if you'll really be able to wrap everything up in just one more part. Maybe an epilogue is in order here!

Ann

So now they have the suit. I bet Clark deepens his voice automatically when he dons the suit.

I can just picture him flying down to talk to Henderson and of course before he can get a word out ....

Superman talks in a deeper voice? I guess, I should start watching all those first season episodes in English. But I soooo love Clark's German voice. This is a dilemma.

I'm not sure I'll manage to post the last this evening. This one is going to need a last thorough look to make sure I didn't forget anything.

I'm glad you liked this part. Thanks for staying with me...

Finally caught up with this again. I had completely forgotten that Lois might know about the suits.

Michael