Alisha - I'm so glad you posted!!! I still loved this!! I'm with whoever it was a couple posts ago who said that Clark will need therapy. The only thing that would have made it worse is if he saw Martha. I can totally see his face - like when Jonathan showed him the painting and he sort of cocked his head and raised his brows and said 'Mom?'.
I already wrote the one you mentioned - it's siting on the HD somewhere and may need slightly tweaked since it was written after your first one but it's also MUCH later in the timeline.
That said - you do have several other fics that need working on [nag *her* about those people - there's some good stuff there!], but if inspiration strikes, these are pretty short, right?
Carol