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sigh

and that's all i have time for with sick kids and all

and not a happy sigh

send it all to me [had to get that in there]

c

You should hide! First Dan and now Deter, woman are you trying to make us all sick!

I am stil worried about Vicky. She is aging every minute, missing her mommy and daddy.

Sigh. You know, I was all ready to throw in some rock star fingers for you posting tonight. Deter totally stomps that celebration.

Great part (er chapter), ML. It looks like Lois has finally come to her senses and decided to ditch that weasel of a slime ball wannabe reporter, Kent for someone who is actually willing to bend her to his will.

There is one thing I don't get. The whole Orani jewels gift thingy, wouldn't that have happened either way in season one? Or is this a clue of some sort?

Loved the floating-thing. That was just hilarious. But it also shows what a mismatch they are. Lois never before failed to pick up on Clark's cues.

And since post-hypnotic suggestions seem to work I will have to try something

Repeat after me:
I will post at 12 o'clock.
I will post at 12 o'clock.
I will post at 12 o'clock.
I will post at 12 o'clock.
I will post at 12 o'clock.
I will post at 12 o'clock.


Michael, who is not worried but just wants to see more of the happy couple. Lois really deserves someone better than a scumbag like Kent.

Oh God! My only question is... when are you going to post the next part and is this also going to turn into a trilogy or more?

With Kent out of the picture, Deter's pretty much free to do whatever he wants, and there's no more Vibro Whammy to lurch Lane out of the sick post-hypnotic suggestions.

Will it be Perry and Jimmy to the rescue this time? But even if it is that's not going to stop what would happen the night where you left us hanging, or will it? Maybe Kent has those gut feelings and he goes flying straight through those glass walls of Deter's lair. Maybe Lane *is* strong enough to override hypnoism as she claimed in "Illusions of Grandeur." Although she wasn't very successful then either.

Or wait.. I have a horrible thought... the sad sad song in Lane's Regina residence, is that for Deter or Kent? Maybe Lane moves in with Deter, and Kent moves out of this world with Zara and Ching for a number of years (We are in 1995/1996 and we have till 2001)... And when something happens to Deter, she moves to Regina, revamps her lifestyle, punches bags, etc etc... no no can't be... too many loopholes in this scenario.. Besides you can't be so evil... can you?

Wait, this isn't the week where you're going on a 2-week vacation, are you? :p

Technically since this chapter/part was posted early, we should be getting the nex part tonight, right?

I don't know what the problem is, Carol. You asked for Lane and Kent togetherness - and, other than making love, how could they be more together than Lane lying on top of Kent? You asked for more smoochies and although I haven't given you that yet, it's obvious I'm heading in that direction. So... what's the problem?

You're welcome

But... But... *quivering lip* You can't *doooo* that. I can't wait two days to finally be seeing Deter and Lois being together they way they should have been in the show.

wow...I think I threw up in my mouth a little bit there Michael. ( )

The reigning Queen of Cliff Hangers has returned. Bow down

And ditto on the "great part, blah blah" line.

It's Sunday 4 pm my time, I can't wait for the next part.

While waiting for the next part here's another theory- Maybe somethng does happen between Lane and Max, but later Lane realizes something's amiss / fishy and recruits Clark and his super-senses to find out what...

(just trying to pass the time till the next part).

Deter creeped me out more Lex. I hope our visit with Deter is very short.

Next part is coming right up (I hope). My computer is running really slowly tonight so it might take a few minutes. But it's coming. I promise.

ML