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The Assignment - Comments #54276 07/30/08 03:08 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland LabRat OP Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner
OP LabRat Boards Chief Administrator Emeritus Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 9,362 Scotland	Quote [That was the real reason behind the one hour challenge right? Can't be long, must end up in your inbox soon? Sounds like a ploy for submissions to me...] You know...that bit of cunning never even occurred to me. Shame on me! Anyhoo - this was funny and cute. I'm such a sucker for forced intimacy stories. Love 'em. LabRat Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal. The Musketeers

Re: The Assignment - Comments #54277 07/30/08 04:30 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 652 Florida cp33 Columnist
cp33 Columnist Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 652 Florida	Carol that was delightful! Loved the tone Clark took with Lois when she started to boss him around in the room. Great job.

Re: The Assignment - Comments #54278 07/30/08 06:06 PM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY Laurach Pulitzer
Laurach Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 4,058 NY	I loved this! All the little trying to talk herself out of thinking of Clark's muscles and such was just perfect, funny and adorable. I loved this and it wouldn't upset me if you continued this little fic either<g> Laura Clark: “If we can be born in an instant, and die in an instant, why can’t we fall in love in an instant?” Caroline's "Stardust"

Re: The Assignment - Comments #54279 07/31/08 02:08 AM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 45 CarolynK Blogger
CarolynK Blogger Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 45	Loved Lois' internal dialog. Guess it's not just a river in Egypt... It was just so funny the way she kept 'editing' her thoughts, almost as if she were writing an article. Just kept re-phrasing things until everything's nice and tidy and under her control -- in her own mind. Poor girl, LOL! This whole piece was a giggle. And it was nice to see Clark showing some spine! Peace, Carolyn

Re: The Assignment - Comments #54280 07/31/08 06:11 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Carol, I can't believe you managed this in just one hour. This sure is one funny piece of fluff. Slightly evil Clark, Drawn-To-Clark Lois, and the whole atmosphere. Thanks for taking the hour to write this. Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: The Assignment - Comments #54281 07/31/08 08:27 AM
Joined: May 2006 Posts: 1,065 Los Angeles jojo_da_crow Top Banana
jojo_da_crow Top Banana Joined: May 2006 Posts: 1,065 Los Angeles	Haha this was awesome Carol. I'm glad I dropped in and read it. Very cute! Angry Clark: CLARK SMASH! Lois: Ork!

Re: The Assignment - Comments #54282 07/31/08 04:48 PM
Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 700 Beth S. Columnist
Beth S. Columnist Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 700	Carol, I'm completely blown away by this! You managed it all in an hour? However, after a glance at my overflowing inbox, I'm reminded of how easily you write. Seriously, I have no idea how you do it. Anyway, this story was sweet and funny and all sorts of good things and I loved reading it.

Re: The Assignment - Comments #54283 08/02/08 08:57 AM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,371 Likes: 1 Corvallis bobbart Top Banana
bobbart Top Banana Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,371 Likes: 1 Corvallis	Cute and funny. It's nice to see Mad Dog Lane in full form. As with some of the others that have commented, I loved the exchange where Lois is trying to get Clark to get here some cloths. I've always thought that Lois being demanding and Clark standing up to that aspect of her personality is one of the most important aspects of their relationship. This is an impressive accomplishment for an hour and 22 seconds. Well done. Bob

Re: The Assignment - Comments #54284 08/02/08 10:25 PM
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TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	Ha ha!! That was so sweet and funny. I loved how Lois couldn't help noticing how incredibly well-built Clark was, and tried to deny it to herself, and kept noticing it all over again. The ending was hysterical!!!! Ann

Re: The Assignment - Comments #54285 08/03/08 08:45 AM
Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 367 England A Alisha Knight Beat Reporter
Alisha Knight Beat Reporter A Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 367 England	Carol, that was brilliant. I loved it! It was also nice to read something by you that I haven't known the end of for months and where I can leave feedback without worrying about saying something I shouldn't!

Re: The Assignment - Comments #54286 08/06/08 12:05 PM
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carolm Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO	I can't believe I haven't responded to this yet... so sorry. But first... SQUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! I get a fdk thread started by Labby!!!!! WOOHOO!!!! [And as soon as I get this back from beta - it's on it's way to your inbox. Promise.] And sure.... I'm sure the potential increase in submissions had NOTHING to do with it . I still say you should grab one of those 'first lines' and set your timer and go. Forget rewriting or anything else . Heck, I may have another go at it tonight as I'm sort of stumped on LtL: LS at the moment... Anyway... Glad you guys enjoyed this. I love Lois arguing with herself about how she's NOT attracted to Clark. Ah, yes... Alisha has known the end to way too many things recently. May have to rectify that... Of course, if some of the fic she keeps teasing me with ends up in my inbox [seriously folcs, NAG HER!], I may share . And there was more I was going to say but the chicken nuggets are about done . Thanks again everyone! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Carol [who still watches her inbox for more Strength as well as the superhero returns bit and promises not to send Beth ANY more until she gets it ] My articles Debt Free Blog: Normal is BROKE! Be Weird! - Under Construction

Re: The Assignment - Comments #54287 08/06/08 03:12 PM
Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921 A anonpip Features Writer
anonpip Features Writer A Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921	Ok, I know this is very belated, but I'm terribly behind in my reading. I wouldn't have even gotten to this yet (since I'm planning to start where I left off over a month ago whenever I get back to having time to read), but I started to read the sequel and wanted to read this first. I'm so glad I did. It was so funny and cute - the perfect diversion from RL. And you really wrote it in an hour? Really? I'm in awe of you, Carol. I have no hope of writing anything coherent in that amount of time and you can write something not only coherent, but actually good and fun to read. I'm jealous.

Re: The Assignment - Comments #54288 08/08/08 02:42 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country Artemis Pulitzer
Artemis Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,837 California fly-over country	Really cute and clever! Artemis History is easy once you've lived it. - Duncan MacLeod Writing history is easy once you've lived it. - Artemis

Re: The Assignment - Comments #54289 10/23/08 10:07 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet... Mister Data Pulitzer
Mister Data Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet...	Wonderful story. Nice reveal. “…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26. Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

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