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What can I say, the ride isn't over yet.

Part 20 / TOC

Michael

Finally they talk. I love this chapter Michael.

Wow. I have tried several times to go back and read this from the beginning but it kept exceeding my angst-o-meter limits. I finally worked my way thought it and am glad I did.

All the way back the the original TV shows, I have been amazed at the fact that you have two people whose job is to communicate, that continually fail so miserably when communicating with each other. I guess that is one of the things that makes their relationship special. Being the fan of happy/sappy outcomes that I am, I am glad to see that they are FINALLY communicating. I hope that is a light at the end of the tunnel and not just a train heading their way.

In any case, angst and all I have found the story to be very entertaining.

Bob

You know? It’s an interesting point you’ve brought out. Because I’m on to my last semester of college, finishing up my degree on Publicity, especialized on comunication, and I too have problems when communicating on moments of extrem emotions. I guess, it’s as if we are not good at what we are good at. It’s like when an actor has problems pretending. And a writter has problems expressing his feelings.

In Brazil we have a saying “Casa de ferreiro, espeto de pau.” Which is something along the lines of “In a blacksmith’s home the sitcks are made of wood.”

Anyway... about part 20 of Furry, it really is good, and they are finally talking and *listening*. But please, will you stop teasing us already? I knew Clark wouldn’t run for it, and he is right, marrige is not always the best solution, but why do you have to leave us hangging on the best part ?... Always!

Clark's thought process at the start of this had me giggling. I was so glad to see them working through things.

I said it on the Dark Side and I gladly repeat it here. You guys are an amazing audience.

cp, it so great to see you FDK on both boards. Thanks

Bob, welcome to the boards and thanks for letting me know you’re reading this.
This literally left me speechless for a while. Wow, what a compliment and I had no idea it could be this angsty. I guess it really is different when you’re reading a story instead of writing it. I’m so happy you managed to plow through the angst.
You’re so right about that.
A train in their tunnel of love. Hm… will have to talk to Muse about that
Thanks so much

dede, you’re quite right about that your analysis of not being able to apply your professional knowledge to your personal life.
Uh, simple answer: I ran out of time and had a nice 22kb package all ready and put together. But I promise, I will provide more in the next part.

Beth, it’s great to know I could deliver with the (supposedly) funny stuff. That’s always so touch and go. What can I say. I’m a sucker for happy endings

Thanks again for the wonderful FDK. Looking forward to seeing you back next week