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YAY! You posted it! I was more than happy to beta this. It made me happy. I hope you write more...I will be more than happy to beta future stuff for you as well. Kudos again on the story.

Hey there! I'm glad you took the plunge to post. I echo GuineaPants with the kudos in completing as part of the hour challenge--I can never do those myself. There's no way for inspiration to dry up faster

Neat revelation scenario!

alcyone

Oh I liked it. Quick and to the point. Very nice job! Laura

Thanks ya'll! It is exciting to see people read and reply.

Cute, I liked it!

This is really great. For my part I wouldn’t have guessed that this was a “first” story. You have taken a good simple premise with a developed it nicely to a short topic. This was a good use of sarcasm by Lois with the “only tonight” comment and I like the way Lois keeps referring to Clark in the 3rd person.

This also leaves enough of a hook to continue the story. For example, what was the “rest of the story” on the CD and Kryptonite? Are they going to be OK-enough to investigate this together?

Bob

Bob you made me blush Thanks for your praise, it is nice to have comments. It sorta gives a girl courage to try it again.