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Wonder what will happen in part 22

Part 21 / TOC

Michael

Had to reply again a tell you how much I enjoyed this part. It was good to see them actually talk.

I found some of Lois' thoughts to be particularly interesting in light of the overall story line presented. Way back in this story I was struggling with the way Lois reacted. My initial response was that pretty much all of Lois' actions were an overreaction to her discovery that Clark had been lying to her. As a consequence I was having trouble accepting this as a real, complete interpretation of Lois. (That was also when my angst-o-meter kept firing off.) However, as I have become more familiar with the Lois of this story, I have come to see her as a quite believable character. She is someone that is a bit more reactionary and a bit less self-assured than my typical image of Lois. (I really do think she's bipolar.)

I actually think that her “waiting for Clark to walk” thoughts in this chapter are completely consistent with a Lois that would have done all the somewhat extreme actions that were covered in earlier chapters.

So, I guess what I am saying is that I believe you have created a believable, if somewhat more angsty, vision of Lois. Nicely done.

And finally, is is good to see them finally using words to communicate instead of fight.

As always, I look forward to the next chapter.

Bob

Hey guys Thanks so much for the FDK.

cp It's so great to see you FDK-ing on both sides. And you're right, talking is good. Do you remember the day and a half they didn't talk during 'Stop the Presses'? Anyway, can't promise how long they will keep talking. Or rather, keep talking in a gfic-presentable version

Bob, in the danger of sounding repetitive, thanks for FDK-ing here, too I'm totally happy I managed to round out her character for you.
Yep, that's my Lois Although, I never really thought of her as bipolar, but rather just cracking up under the stress of the revelation followed by sex followed by all the bad memories of the past. But that's alright
Wow, thanks.

Michael

Michael, I completely forgot to leave feedback on this! I'm so sorry. But I enjoyed it as always, and am looking forward to the next part.

Hi Beth! Thanks for FDK-ing. It's always great to know I'm still doing it right

Michael