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Well, that’s it, that’s all, folks. Hope you enjoyed the ride.

I suspect this might be my last story - at least for a while. Usually by this point in posting, I’m already about half way through writing the first draft of my next story. This time... nope, nothing, nada. Just don’t seem to have the energy with everything going on in real life at the moment. Then again, who knows. Maybe tomorrow I’ll come up with an idea that’s just begging to be written.

Anyway, I figure this is a good way to go out - with my longest story. Still not up to Labrat’s standards for long stories (does she still hold the record?), but... Well, I tried.

NOW you offer...

Nice ending.

There is no reason for this to be your last fic - just may take a bit longer for you to get posting .

I do like it very much, but I would have liked to see how Lane and Kent dealt with their parents and not just Perry but that's just me .

And Vicky's about to get a baby brother.

As for the next story? How this second Lane and Kent dealt with S3 while married? Including all that NK junk?

Or not... But I think it's a bit premature to hang up your keyboard.

No, Labby's not longest anymore. Masques is 2. Longest Road: The Roads They Walked Alone by Rac is 1. Learning to Love [by me ] should be 3 when I get it sent to Labby, but currently is Long, Strange Trip by L, followed by Long Road Home by Erin and Caped Fear [I think] by Labby.

Something more from you before too long please!
Carol

It's... over? I still can't quite believe it! I'm expecting for another part to come jumping out and surprise me any time.

ML, I enjoyed this story so much. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Oh no! I hope your muse gets tickled soon. Otherwise, I might go into withdrawal.

Thanks again for such a great story!

What's this 'the end' business? Ahh, great story, thank you so much for sharing! Will be hanging around in case you get another idea!

Great ending
JD

Excellent story, ML. I usually wait to read a long one like this until it's over because suspense and I do not do well together, unless I'm writing it. But last story? Ridiculous! Just because you haven't got another idea yet, it doesn't mean The End. It doesn't mean a thing.

I used to write stories practically nonstop, but life got immeasurably more painful and complicated for me in December of '05 with the death of my sister and all the things that resulted from it. I still have to cope with many of the things that came about because of it (which look like they could echo for years) and as a result it's harder to get ideas for stories. They come less frequently, but they never really go away. It just takes more effort, which I put in because I know if I didn't write I'd lose my mind.

Everyone has dry spells. That doesn't mean you never write again. It does mean you have to try a little harder, but it's worth it.

Nan

wow. thank you for this amazing story - really, kept me looking forward to another day. please, please, please write more if you can! thanks again, sarah

I really hope this isn't yor final story. I have enjoyed all your works. I loved the resolution to this plot.

You know, well you don't but Yellow Fever is one of my top three fics.


More please!

Delightful tale. Very well done.
While I am sorry to see you stop writing. You are not alone a number of writers get burned out on a certain type of story or a set of series characters.

Often the hiatus results in a renewed vigor in their writing.

BTW After having dealt with Jason Trask I can't see Lois or Clark ever naming a son Jason no matter what happen in Superman Returns.

I feel a bit guilty that I didn't read more than the last parts of this fic... but I enjoyed the last parts, really!!! And like the others, I so hope that this isn't the last story we will see from you. You are one of those who have really made their mark on the body of Lois and Clark fanfiction. In other words, you are unforgettable here.

Ann

Okay, I'll stop now with the plot bunny barrage and shameless begging. But if one of those bunnies did get stuck, you know we can take it. Perhaps you could also do several shorter pieces in the LnK2 world? I really must stop, this is getting embarrassing.

Michael

Well, by my calculations, There's No Place Like Home is longer than Caped Fear (or at least it's longer than the pg version of Caped Fear), but all the rest of those stories are longer. So I guess that means I don't even make it into the top five, eh?

I'm the same way, Nan. And even when I'm writing... Sometimes I find myself writing as fast as possible simply because I still can't stand the suspense

That's good to know. It's just that this is the first time since 1999 that I've not had a story on the go. So... it's a funny feeling. Who knows... Maybe I'll get the itch again this afternoon, but at the moment... I'm just a little... burnt out, I think.

You're right. I didn't even make either of those connections. So... how about we have a name Lois and Clark's son contest? Anyone have any name ideas?

I wondered that, too.

I assume here you are asking about the security breach in Star Labs back in 1992 and not that I somehow inadvertantly had Star Labs burning to the ground in this part and just didn't notice . Well, that is just one of the great mysteries in life. Maybe Lane and Kent will make that the first story they investigate as a team.

Anyway, thanks for all the great comments. It was a wonderful way to wake up this morning. And now... I'm out to split wood to fill my woodshed for the winter. (Doesn't that sound like fun )

Oh, and I'm still looking for a new name for Lois and Clark's son. So... any ideas would be welcome.


ML

Why? This will be their second child, is there some reason in the story to make them expect more or new problems with a second pregnancy?

I'm thinking that many tales name him after people they know. The drawback in doing this is someone often feels slighted. So perhaps we could rule out

• Jonathan
• Samuel
• Jor
• James
• Perry

And there are names that have negative associations for our couple ...

• Jason
• Alexander
• Daniel
• Paul
• Claude
• Leon
• Kyle
• Ralph
• Jeffferson

So onward to more positive ideas

• Gregory (Atticus not being a name you'd want to burden a child with)
• Benjamin (could be for Ben Franklin or Ben Caxton (Stranger in a Strange Land))
• Joseph (as in Joseph Pulitzer) This name would have a double meaning when one thinks of the events of the life of the biblical Joseph.

A list of Journalists in the 20th century might show up someone who might have been a hero of either Clark or Lois.

There is a piece of dialog in there, where LnK tell LnC that they can trust Bernie, he even saved Lois life during the birth of their son.

Michael

From the list by Frameworks

Hy Newbold Kent after Hy Gardner and Newbold Noyes Jr. There is of course the name Seymour.





I needed that, we are hip deep in hurricane prep in Florida and tomorrow is the first day of school for at least half of the state!

To side-step the question of Lois' life, I've rewritten that section to read as possible:

ML

Thanks, ML.

Michael

By the way, so far I'm really liking the name Benjamin. So... any other ideas for a name?

ML

My nephew's new baby boy is named Benjamin <g>

Nan

Benjamin is a sweet name. I like it. And it would be nice not to have one of all those 'J' boy's names for a change (Jon, Jor, Jeremy, C J etc).

Ann

Well, that's it then. I'm going to name him Benjamin after Nan's nephew's new baby boy.

I like it, too. What is it about names? It is often so difficult coming up with the right one. I must have gone through half a dozen names before settling on Vicky for Lois and Clark's daughter.

And then there is the question of spelling... Do I spell it Vicky or Vicki? Then I decided that given that in the series, we meet Tiffani - who made a point of saying that she spelled her name with an 'i' and thought... Nah. Lois and Clark are going to spell their daughter's name the old fashioned way.

ML