Thanks, robinson!
It's so great to know you are reading. I tend to forget that there are people reading who don't leave feedback (even though I'm guilty of doing the same all the time), so it's a real boost to my ego to hear from someone new.
I'm glad this is interesting. I really liked the concept of making this three people, but often struggle with how original it is. I try to stick to the scripts sometimes as I want to see how much needs to change, but then worry that I'm not writing anything all that interesting.
That's part of why I liked the basketball scene. Without a separate Clark and Superman, that just couldn't happen.
Thanks again for the encouragement!