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I hope you liked this

In case you're wondering why Clark takes longer to fetch the food than he did in the pilot. Well, lets just say, the cooks don't do super-speed in Shanghai

Part 24 / TOC

Michael

I was surprised to see this here and not in the nfic folder. though I see that there was no real need nfic wise that is. I just thought you'd be putting them in both all along. No big deal, I was just glad to see it at all. I liked the aftermath. I hope Clark doesn't get all guilty about the train thing if he wasn't there to help. Or did he help and forget about it? It has been a while since I read 23 so maybe it is something I forgot about. Anyway, I hope you spare us Clark's guilt. I think he's suffered enough. He has to give up being superman when he is with his love and he has to get it through his head that others have to take up the slack when he is off duty. Superman or not, he can only do so much. He deserves to be happy. Cute chapter. Laura

Hi Laura!

Thanks

Oh, yes, I do. I guess,the A/N might not have stated it clearly enough, the nfic-version is just a day late Well, it's remedied now.

And the train was back in part 15 or so. The one he thinks Intergang derailed as a diversion.
No guilt. He already worked through it with his passing comment regarding Intergang.

He does, and thanks so much for your insightful words.

Michael

I loved Martha's reaction to hearing Lois on the phone. Can't wait to see the whole train/Intergang thing worked out.

Hi Beth!

Thanks, I'm glad you liked the phone call


I'm working on giving them some very nice talks right now

Michael

I have to tell you again how much I loved this chapter. I look forward to their conversation about the rescue.

Hi cp!

Wow, thanks . It's always great to see FoLCs liking both versions

Michael