Sorry I haven't posted feedback on this story yet.
I find it very ammusing Lucy and Jimmy in this story (in particular when they're married) remind me of fourth season LNC. (WAFFS, sexual tension, PDAs, etc.)
Whereas Lois and Clark in some ways remind me of Lucy and Jimmy in fourth season. Now that's not a clear parallel, especially since they never dated in the fourth season. But I mean how neither of them could make their relationships work, and Jimmy in particular was always a little envious of LNC's relationship.
Of course, we know from orginial Learning to Love that this LNC are making progress in their relationship, but they're not where Lucy and Jimmy are now