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Wow, Beth. You sure did give us some insights here. Funny thing is, with so many next gen stories out there, I really thought, you where showing us 15 1/2 year old Ellie. Or perhaps 17 1/2. But in your 'verse they get their wings at 21, don't they?

I was a bit surprised to see Arty had been this bad.

Loved their talk. Sofa vs coffee table

And this last paragraph, I think he never told her this, has he?

Michael

Great part Beth,

Well, Arty sure explains some of Ellie’s fears. What a bum!

Bob

Great part, Beth.

I really enjoyed their discussion and am really glad that they were able to get some of their fears out in the open. Now that Jay has found a place and purpose for himself, he's really relaxed enough in his own skin to start helping Ellie with her issues.

I can only hope that once they feel the acceptance and trust grow between them that Ellie's aura issues will disappear.

BJ

Sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this. I'm trying to survive without internet until the company decides to hook me up, and it's not going so well.

I think I had actually put down 20 at one point. Maybe a bit of an arbitrary number, but that's what seemed to work at the time. *shrug*

I think Clark and Lois would want them to explore life after high school a bit before they got tied up with being a superhero. Of course, if you look at stories like The Forgotten, you can see why the kids would step up to the plate a little earlier.

You know, he kind of surprised me in being that mean. Funny how things like that happen sometimes.

So true. What's that old adage? It goes something like you can't really love someone unless you love yourself.

Thanks for the comments everyone. Glad to see you guys are still hanging in.