I have no time to reply properly, but I really like where you are taking this fic. So Lois and Clark will go on an extended honeymoon, eh? Clothing optional. Bring the Superman suit, just in case Clark is forced to take a brief break from the preferred activities. And maybe a tiny little piece of Red K would be in order, to do some proper adjusting of Clark's KE field?
Yes! I'm looking forward to the, eh... proceedings!
Ann