Thanks, Lieta.
You know I was really worried about this episode when I started this story. As Superman plays such a little part, it was hard to see how it would change here. And yet, this episode is so important to Clark and Lois' relationship that I couldn't skip it (as I've done with other episodes where nothing changes). But in the end, I'm pretty happy with the chapters.
Of all the episodes I've "re"-written so far, though, All Shook Up is my favorite in terms of how things changed from the original, but we're still a couple of chapters away to see if you agree.