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FDK: Strange Visitor(s) from other Planet(s) - Prologue #56106 10/19/08 12:52 AM
Joined: Oct 2008 Posts: 57 Scotland sueKay87 OP Freelance Reporter
OP sueKay87 Freelance Reporter Joined: Oct 2008 Posts: 57 Scotland	Hi there, Feedback would be greatly appreciated! Lois and Clark Icons: http://suekay.creativist.me/lois-and-clark.html http://suekay.creativist.me/teri-hatcher.html Photography: http://skdailey.portfolik.com/ Fanfiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/548649/sueKay-04

Re: FDK: Strange Visitor(s) from other Planet(s) - Prologue #56107 10/19/08 03:54 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,070 Likes: 31	Hi Sue Kay! Welcome to the boards. I really do want to know more about Subject 001. Is it 2006? Is this Lois? Where did she get the globe? How did her hair get cut? Is the next part going to be longer. Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Strange Visitor(s) from other Planet(s) - Prologue #56108 10/19/08 04:35 AM
Joined: Oct 2008 Posts: 57 Scotland sueKay87 OP Freelance Reporter
OP sueKay87 Freelance Reporter Joined: Oct 2008 Posts: 57 Scotland	Thank you for the feedback Michael We'll learn more about Subject 001 shortly, but she's not Lois The Prologue is set in 1994, but most of the rest of the story is set in 2006 I'm aiming for most chapters to be about 1,500 words and I've got quite a few chapters waiting to be posted Lois and Clark Icons: http://suekay.creativist.me/lois-and-clark.html http://suekay.creativist.me/teri-hatcher.html Photography: http://skdailey.portfolik.com/ Fanfiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/548649/sueKay-04

Re: FDK: Strange Visitor(s) from other Planet(s) - Prologue #56109 10/19/08 04:49 AM
Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 73 South America Hana Freelance Reporter
Hana Freelance Reporter Joined: Jul 2008 Posts: 73 South America	Please more, it looks interesting Subject 001 is someone we know from the series? (I thought it was Lois too) HANA http://community.livejournal.com/hanas_room/ HANA

Re: FDK: Strange Visitor(s) from other Planet(s) - Prologue #56110 10/19/08 04:57 AM
Joined: Oct 2008 Posts: 57 Scotland sueKay87 OP Freelance Reporter
OP sueKay87 Freelance Reporter Joined: Oct 2008 Posts: 57 Scotland	Hi Hana Thank you! We never met Subject 001 on the show, but she is a known figure in Superman mythos Lois and Clark Icons: http://suekay.creativist.me/lois-and-clark.html http://suekay.creativist.me/teri-hatcher.html Photography: http://skdailey.portfolik.com/ Fanfiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/548649/sueKay-04

Re: FDK: Strange Visitor(s) from other Planet(s) - Prologue #56111 10/19/08 09:00 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO C carolm Pulitzer
carolm Pulitzer C Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,764 Southwest MO	Interesting, but not nearly long enough . FoLCs are so insatiable... /cough/ Michael /cough/ Carol My articles Debt Free Blog: Normal is BROKE! Be Weird! - Under Construction

Re: FDK: Strange Visitor(s) from other Planet(s) - Prologue #56112 10/19/08 02:17 PM
Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823 IolantheAlias Pulitzer
IolantheAlias Pulitzer Joined: Feb 2008 Posts: 2,823	You've got an interesting hook right at the start. A subject (who? we're wondering), running (why? presumably for her life?), being chased (by whom? why? Why would they think she's evil?). Frustratingly, you've posed these questions and then ended the post! Aargh! Please post more soon!

Re: FDK: Strange Visitor(s) from other Planet(s) - Prologue #56113 10/19/08 03:06 PM
Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 652 Florida cp33 Columnist
cp33 Columnist Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 652 Florida	Please post again soon!

Re: FDK: Strange Visitor(s) from other Planet(s) - Prologue #56114 10/20/08 01:40 AM
Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 777 floor 13 S SJH Features Writer
SJH Features Writer S Joined: Jul 2004 Posts: 777 floor 13	Nice start. Reminds me a little of "THX 1138", Guess it's the shaved head and scant clothing. "I'm red-eyed, tired and drunk" Teri Hatcher "Fun will now commence" 7of9

Re: FDK: Strange Visitor(s) from other Planet(s) - Prologue #56115 10/20/08 08:53 AM
Joined: Oct 2008 Posts: 57 Scotland sueKay87 OP Freelance Reporter
OP sueKay87 Freelance Reporter Joined: Oct 2008 Posts: 57 Scotland	Carolm, IolantheAlias, cp33 and SJH, Thank you for the feedback! Chapter One is now up: http://www.lcficmbs.com/ubb/ultimatebb.php?ubb=get_topic&f=1&t=010130 Lois and Clark Icons: http://suekay.creativist.me/lois-and-clark.html http://suekay.creativist.me/teri-hatcher.html Photography: http://skdailey.portfolik.com/ Fanfiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/u/548649/sueKay-04

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