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Any feedback at all? frown

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I did read but time has been short yesterday and today.

Interesting.

Jimmy. Powers.

[I think. My remembery isn't working real well, but I do remember I was waiting for 5... wink ]

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I just caught up with this story last night! It's really interesting.

I don't know why, because reading your intro. now, you specifically say it takes place in 2001. But for some reason I thought this was a season 1 story. (Which for the record, I don't usually like.) I'm glad it's not.

I really like the interaction with Cat, Perry, Clark and Lois. And Kara is a nice added touch.

What happened to Jimmy? Is he another Kryptonian or has he been hit by lightening?

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I really like this story so far. Poor Kara wants to help but is understandably afraid of getting caught. I can't wait to find out what is going on with Jimmy. The scene with lois and Clark talking about Lucy crashing the car had me laughing.


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Still reading! Just no time to do anything else. But I still love the story. laugh

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Thank you so much for all the feedback!!!

Chapter 5's going up tonight!!


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