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Feedback would be appreciated.

Great story! When is the next part?

Oh, I really liked that Kiley didn't know about the cage. It makes sense to me that with Lex dead, there would be no reason for Lois and Clark to tell their children about it, and therefore the news would really upset Kiley.

I do feel badly for her, though. Martha's reaction to the news was pure Martha, but I don't see Lois or Clark being quite so understanding.

So Kiley told her Grandma... Nice. Wonder what sort of matter you will spray around the room, though

Michael

Hello, everyone. Thanks for the feedback.

Meadowrose - Thank you. The next part will be up on Wed. evening.

Nancy - That was my thought on the Kryptonite cage, too. Actually, in chapter three, Kiley looks up the old newspapers on Google to find more information on Lex Luthor and company because her parents never told her anything at all. Why would they relieve bad memories? They didn't see any reason it would come up again.

And I'm glad you thought Martha's reaction was so in character. I had pictured this reaction from her for a long time, but I really worked hard to get it right when I wrote it.


Michael - Yes. Kiley told Grandma. What am I spraying? (Is this meant medophorically - like spraying bad news,etc. or literally?)