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FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 7 #58510 12/18/08 02:24 PM
Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,371 Likes: 1 Corvallis bobbart OP Top Banana
OP bobbart Top Banana Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 1,371 Likes: 1 Corvallis	I had a feeling that Rachael might be tired for a reason. Too bad her career plans aren’t going where she wants them. I loved the twist on the interview. This part got to me: Quote Lois jerked away, almost as though freed from a spell by Clark’s voice. She hurried over to him, “Sorry... Lex... duty calls...” .....Open rant..... I really hate Lex. I mean, I REALLY hate Lex. I hate Lex so much that I’ve never even contemplated writing anything with Lex in it. I think I’ve changed my mind. I need to do something with Lex in a story so that his fate appropriately reflects my affection. .....Close rant..... Anyway, I love what you did with Lois's "interview" with Lex. Having Clark present as a chaperone provides for an interesting dynamic. Bob

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 7 #58511 12/18/08 05:03 PM
Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 700 Beth S. Columnist
Beth S. Columnist Joined: Aug 2007 Posts: 700	I really liked seeing CJ and Rachel together here without Clark. It was nice to see them interacting as husband and wife. You've got me hooked with the future of this Lois and Clark. It's close to the original, yet there are some changes that make me so curious!

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 7 #58512 12/19/08 10:47 AM
Joined: Jun 2008 Posts: 527 Texas L Lieta Columnist
Lieta Columnist L Joined: Jun 2008 Posts: 527 Texas	Bob: Anything to inspire you! =P And originally I cut out Luthor's little speech.... but it has such creepy potential... I just had to work it back in. Beth: I'm glad you liked that scene... originally I had Rachel describe it but didn't include it myself... I liked how it turned out =) Sara "Lieta"

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 7 #58513 12/27/08 12:14 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Wonderful part, Sara Okay, I have to say, the possibility of Rachel being pregnant never crossed my mind when you mentioned her tiredness in the earlier parts. It's just so out there. A pregnancy without a dramatic impact in a LnC story Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 7 #58514 12/27/08 04:02 AM
Joined: Jun 2008 Posts: 527 Texas L Lieta Columnist
Lieta Columnist L Joined: Jun 2008 Posts: 527 Texas	I have to say... the imagery of Clark being there during that was amusing to me... but for Lex... RAFO =P And for Rachel... yeah... pregnancy without any of the season 4 buildup, shrug but how do you like CJ's method of discovery and reaction? =P Sara "Lieta"

Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 7 #58515 12/27/08 04:05 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Yeah, the hearing bit was so sweet Michael Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

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