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FDK - Ficathon- Whispers 1/2 #59358 01/06/09 08:19 PM
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OP bellarase Beat Reporter Joined: Apr 2008 Posts: 397	Oh this was adorable! I love the premise and it was so amazing cute, i can't wait for the next part! LOIS:I don't like you. MAYSON: Really? Oh god, that is such a relief - I don't like you either. LOIS: That makes me feel so much better

Re: FDK - Ficathon- Whispers 1/2 #59359 01/07/09 02:43 PM
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TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	This was a sweet but kryptic beginning. Who is that old man? Needless to say, I loved the snuggling in this chapter! Ann

Re: FDK - Ficathon- Whispers 1/2 #59360 01/07/09 04:13 PM
Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ... E Elisabeth Merriwether
Elisabeth Merriwether E Joined: Jan 2004 Posts: 1,864 In a minivan smack dab in the ...	Curious and interesting. Elisabeth

Re: FDK - Ficathon- Whispers 1/2 #59361 01/07/09 11:41 PM
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cp33 Columnist Joined: Jun 2003 Posts: 652 Florida	Interesting start, curious to see what you do next with them.

Re: FDK - Ficathon- Whispers 1/2 #59362 01/07/09 11:42 PM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31 Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner
Darth Michael Boards Chief Administrator Nobel Peace Prize Winner Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 9,066 Likes: 31	Quote Still wanna elope? An eloping-story? Quote He sighed and looked around to see where he was. He shouldn’t have been surprised. He was right beneath Lois’ window. I’m not surprised Quote Lois smiled at him. “Yes, Clark, I know that you are a vir... a very, patient man.” She giggled. “But that’s not what I meant. I just want you to hold me and... and...” Her tone of voice changed to no nonsense. “...keep me warm! It’s freezing in here.” She rubbed her hands up and down her arms. Yeah, right. Although, I guess the window IS open… Quote Lois awakened a short time later and watched Clark sleep. He was smiling and she thought she might know why since she knew what woke her up. Ahem… Quote “Hmm...” He smiled against her soft, inviting lips. “That’s nice, Lois.” Then his eyes were wide open. “Ummm... uhh... umm... I’m sorry... Umm...” He started to inject some space between them. Yep… Quote Lois brushed her fingers against his cheek. “You don’t have to apologize. It’s a perfectly natural thing to happen to a guy, and I was rather enjoying...” Lois! Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, our favorite show, life, and more! (It’s almost like the IRC days of old again!) I go by Michael on the Archives.

Re: FDK - Ficathon- Whispers 1/2 #59363 01/08/09 02:58 AM
Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 273 Hong Kong (ex-pat New Zealande... Lisamaree, the Evil Kiwi Hack from Nowheresville
Lisamaree, the Evil Kiwi Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Apr 2007 Posts: 273 Hong Kong (ex-pat New Zealande...	I like the premise of the story. I am guessing our mystery guest is Santa ho ho ho, but I'm intrigued as to what the object he gave Lois for Clark is. The dialogue between Lois and Clark often read a bit 'stiff' or 'fake' to me... it doesn't quite feel natural or flowing, although I did like the way you made Lois react to Clark and his 'stiff' issues. Not sure about Clark's falling straight back asleep though... mind you... he is a man.... so.... it is somewhat believable. Curious to read the next part of this story and see how it unravels. "He's my best friend, best of all best friends Do you have a best friend too It tickles in my tummy He's so Yummy Yummy Hey you should get a best friend too" - Toy Box

Re: FDK - Ficathon- Whispers 1/2 #59364 01/08/09 06:49 PM
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coolgirl Features Writer C Joined: Sep 2007 Posts: 980	MY STORY! CG ------------ ( oo * Work) + (1 * Hubby) + (2 * Kids) = 0 * Time

Re: FDK - Ficathon- Whispers 1/2 #59365 01/11/09 10:28 AM
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anonpip Features Writer A Joined: Jan 2007 Posts: 921	I loved the Lois and Clark snuggling bit and it made complete sense to me after what they've been through. But what was the thing that Santa (?) gave Lois for Clark?

Re: FDK - Ficathon- Whispers 1/2 #59366 01/11/09 02:35 PM
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Mister Data Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 2,994 In a minivan, next to Elisabet...	This is intriguing! More soon please! James “…with God everything is possible.” Matthew 19:26. Also read Nan's Terran Underground!

Re: FDK - Ficathon- Whispers 1/2 #59367 01/12/09 02:54 PM
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LaraMoon Pulitzer Joined: Jul 2006 Posts: 2,687 Montreal, Canada	Oooh! Great start! Looking forward to seeing the second part. Superman: Why is it that good villains never die? Batman: Clark, what the hell are good villains? => Superman/Batman: Public Enemies

Re: FDK - Ficathon- Whispers 1/2 #59368 01/12/09 06:13 PM
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SapphireBlue Blogger Joined: Feb 2007 Posts: 16 The Land of Blue Sapphires	Thank you all for reading my story! I wanted to let you know that I'll be back soon with part 2. A family illness has left it quite unpolished and unready to be posted.

Re: FDK - Ficathon- Whispers 1/2 #59369 03/05/09 12:15 AM
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Annalina19 Hack from Nowheresville Joined: Feb 2009 Posts: 217 France	It is interesting ! I look forward to the suite !

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