Well, this constant bickering is worth reading your posts twice. Definitely.
This line alone was priceless:
Lois looked to the sky, “Be careful up there...” she whispered, before ordering the cabby to follow Thompson.
<Aww... I’m touched...>
<Good for you, Jay...>
<Jealous?>
<...want me to tell Rach you asked that?>
<No!>
It really is nice to see Clark give as good as he gets.
Or here:
“So that’s your plan? You’re going to capture Superman? And what... dissect him?”
<Wow... Dad was right...>
<Quiet, Jay...>
“I don’t want to *study* him... I want to *kill* him... before he kills us!”
<...or not...>
<Jay!>
<Ok, ok!>
And I'm so not commenting on Jay's <when I'm alone with Rachel> comment here. (After all, this is the PG folder...)
And, of course, there is the whole thing with Cat:
“Well... well... well... what do we have *here*?” Cat had noticed the newsroom’s visitor. “There are *two* of you!”
Lois bit her lip as the twins simultaneously drew back and wary expressions formed on their faces.
And, of course, Jay doing a little digging. (He really should take the time to teach Jimmy a trick or two.)
“Exactly... oh... and by the way... you don’t have *any* of these files, ok?”
Lois stared at him, “Do I want to know where they came from?”
“...the government never *did* implement my recommendations...”
Maybe Jimmy even is the greatest fan Charles King has?
And, of course, the whole scene where LnC interview Newcomb is great, too. It sure adds some depth to Clark and Jay and their current situation.