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Chapter 4
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Carol

/mutters/ Now, you did that just to tempt me, didn't you? /mutters and runs back to starting part 2/

I like the Clark teasing =D I especially like the costume scene... it's so fun to play with humiliating the Superboy, ~.^ I can't wait for more of Bernie meeting the Kents... and I think Lois needs to invest in a gag for Clark until they are past their 'honeymoon' phase...

Now thats funny! good part carol!

The suit-modelling parts were coffee-splutteringly funny!!!! And I loved the Incredibles references, too! No, it's not good to wear a cape if you are not invulnerable, but what if you have an indestructible and delectable tushie?

(Imagine this printed with very fine print: I could have done without the Van bits, but that's me....)

Ann

/evenly distributes drink across the room/

Loved it. Loved Lois Tomato-head. Loved the costumes. Loved the banter.

And while I can't emphasize about the butt-thing with Lois, I sure can sympathize. And poor Ashley, her guy is already buttographed

So, what's next. And is it tomorrow, already?

Michael who now really has to go back to own fic so Carol will find a surprise in her inbox

I'm glad that Ashley and Lois got along so well.

I liked the Superhero business, too. Glad Lois wants to protect Clark from "butt oogling."

And seriously, as I said before, I understand Clark is happy and wants to show how much he loves his wife, but he NEEEDS TO TALK TO HER. As much as she loves Clark, she is obviously bothered by him saying so much/implying so much about their sexual relationship.
He REALLY needs to see what she's comfortable with.

Of course, as I said before, he should make sure he doesn't say in a way that sounds like rejection to her.

Um, it was Lois who elaborated to Bernie and Ashley

Michael

Have they met Cat yet? *pokes Michael*

Sara, you don't by any chance read nfic, do you?

Michael

Yes, that was certainly true. So obviously, Lois doesn't mind that much that they know about the details of her and Clark's RELATIONSHIP.

But what I am talking about is that she is bothered by what Clark is saying about their sexual relationship.

The following passage was written from Lois's POV.
That "embarrassment" thought is an indication of just how UNCOMFORTABLE Lois is with Clark's "innuendo" comment.
The "tomato Lois" that you mentioned (which was also written in the previous chapter) is another indication.

Like I said, I understand that Clark is enjoying talking to his wife this way. He is soaking up the sexual feelings for her that he's been denying for so long.
And he loves doing it in front of his parents because they gave him grief for so long for NOT ACTING LIKE A MAN WHO MAKES LOVE TO HIS WIFE.

But Lois isn't 100% this is going to last. To that end, she may be happy to do this with Clark alone, but she is uncomfortable with Clark flaunting his relationship with her in public.
If Clark REALLY wants to make it up to her, he needs to start reading her signals more carefully.

I just had to giggle at this one. Martha and Jonathan are such fav characters of mine, and they define PDA in every story. Ever.

Nice part,
JD
who doesn't think embarrassment every now and then is a bad thing. It's what you look back and laugh on later and still get to harangue your S/Os about.

Sara, those are very true and deep insights I'll have to admit, I just saw it as "happy" embarrassment, not uncomfortable embarrassment. Otherwise, Lois would have thought it, I guess. Something like "I wish he'd stop" or flat out "I couldn't stand the embarrassment".

I don't know which way Carol intends to pull this, so that's just my take on the (inner) vocalization of her embarrassment. I guess, everyone reads things a little differently

Michael

Daily Posts!! Yay!

I definitely love how Bernie and Ashley are fitting in with the Kents. And the fact that Lois and Clark are showing real PDA.

Carol, have you been watching the Incredibles over and over again, like Christopher? LOL! I can't believe you got Lois to quote about the various superheroes.

Lote

Thanks guys! Going to be a bit before I get 4 posted. DH does a little bit of private therapy and I'm on hold trying to find out why our billing has been declined. And it has to be in today to get paid this month... And since I don't get paid this month and it's a lot of money that take priority. We'll see how much of this response I get done while waiting . I was no. 2 in line when I typed that - now am on hold with a nice lady. Yesterday's lady was half-condescending.

Lieta - glad you liked that .

Lovesuper - hehe - my kids love the smilies.

Ann - yours too!

Michael - I hope you didn't get that all over your keyboard! And now it's tomorrow and I did appreciate the surprise in the inbox .

Sara - see below about the embarrassing thing. I do understand where you're coming from. And the one comment was said only to her and Bernie eavesdropped... I'd imagine he'll be more careful about doing that accidentally in the future...

Hmmm... have they met Cat? I don't remember...

JD - I do love M/J and I prefer to be on the giving end of the embarrassment but yeah...

Michael - that's how I meant it - happy embarrassment. Maybe a bit uncomfortable but not too bad.

Lote - I have watched the Incredibles a couple times recently but I looked up Edna's little tirade about capes .

Queenie - thanks . /whispers/ Queenie's seen previews.../end whisper/

Still on hold but unlikely I'll get it posted till this is taken care of...

Carol